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I like it very much. (true) ;l
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2. 这个价格对我挺合适的。 ?+^p$'5
The price is very suitable for me. （fault) a.}#nSYP
The price is right. Q{L:pce-
Note：suitable(合适的、相配的)最常见的用法是以否定的形式出现在告示或通知上，如：下列节目儿童不宜。The following programme is not suitable for children在这组句子中用后面的说法会更合适。 l:uQ#Z)
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3. 你是做什么工作的呢？ ,w H~.LHi
What's your job? （fault) F P|cA^$<
Are you working at the moment? * 4}NLUVX
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这种说法难道也有毛病吗？是的。因为如果您的谈话对象刚刚失业，如此直接的问法会让对方有失面子，所以您要问：目前您是在上班吗？Are you working at the moment?接下来您才问：目前您在哪儿工作呢？Where are you working these days?或者您从事哪个行业呢？What line of work are you in?顺带说一下，回答这类问题时不妨说得具体一点，不要只是说经理或者秘书 ^-[
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4. 用英语怎么说？ qqf*g=f
How to say? （fault) wC ruj`$
How do you say this in English? !$oa6*<1
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5. 明天我有事情要做。 G 2)F<Y
I have something to do tomorrow? （fault) }X^MB
Sorry but I am tied up all day tomorrow. VN!nef
用I have something to do来表示您很忙，这也完全是中国式的说法。因为每时每刻我们都有事情要做，躺在那里睡大觉也是事情。所以您可以说我很忙，脱不开身：I抦 tied up.还有其他的说法：I抦 I can't make it at that time. I'd love to, but I can't, I have to stay at home. Fp A t
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6. 我没有英文名。 j&'6|s{
I haven't English name. （fault) Zd>sdS`#r
I don't have an English name. QOSMV#Nw%
Note：许多人讲英语犯这样的错误，从语法角度来分析，可能是语法功底欠缺，因为have在这里是实义动词，而并不是在现在完成时里面那个没有意义的助动词。所以，这句话由肯定句变成否定句要加助动词。 P=jsOuW
明白道理是一回事，习惯是另一回事，请您再说几话：我没有钱；I don't have any money.我没有兄弟姐妹；I don't have any brothers or sisters.我没有车。I don't have a car. 4Z~ nWs
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7. 我想我不行。 5~@-LXqL
I think I can't.（fault) aaT3-][
I don't think I can. cK u[ 4D{
Note：这一组然是个习惯问题，在语法上称为否定前置，这就是汉语里面说?我想我不会?的时候，英语里面总是说?我不认为我会?。以后您在说类似的英语句子的时候，只要您留心，也会习惯英语的说法的。 e&d$kUJrq
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8. 我的舞也跳得不好。 #]tDxZ]
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I don't dance well too. （fault) Hy&Z0W'l
I am not a very good dancer either. @:GqOTN
Note：当我们说不擅长做什么事情的时候，英语里面通常用not good at something，英语的思维甚至直接踊跃到：我不是一个好的舞者。 x]x 3iFD
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9. 现在几点钟了？ 4oiE@y&{4
What time is it now? （fault) `cXLa=B)9
What time is it, please? >Rk aFcq
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10. 我的英语很糟糕。 wTU$jd1;+
My English is poor. （fault) w|s2f`!
I am not 100% fluent, but at least I am improving. : #CWiq("%
Note：有人开玩笑说，全中国人最擅长的一句英文是：My English is poor.实话说，我从来没有遇到一个美国人对我说：My Chinese is poor. 无论他们的汉语是好是坏，他们会说: I am still having a few problem, but I getting better. "5~?`5Ff
当您告诉外国人，您的英语很poor，so what(那又怎么样呢)，是要让别人当场施舍给我们一些英语呢，还是说我的英语不好，咱们不谈了吧。 XxS#~J?:_
另外一个更大的弊端是，一边不停的学英语，一边不停地说自己的英语很poor,这正像有个人一边给车胎充气，又一边在车胎上扎孔放气。 &zX W
我坚信，先不谈别的，如果您现在就苦下功夫，把这本薄薄的《英语54321》吃通吃透，您的英语水平立即就会迅速的提高。所以您再也不用说：我的英语很poor. H /x0'
您可以实事求是地说，我的英语还不算十分流利，但至少我在进步。 x"e;T ,c
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11. 你愿意参加我们的晚会吗？ vjx'yh|
Would you like to join our party on Friday? （fault) * $fM}6}
Would you like to come to our party on Friday night? [1 P_^.Htr
Note：join往往是指参加俱乐部或者协会，如：join a health club; join the Communist Party.事实上，常常与party搭配的动词的come 或者go。如go a wild party，或者come to a Christmas Party。 'WP~-}(
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12. 我没有经验。 B?=R= p
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I am I don't know much about that. S*h^7?Bu
Note：I have no experience这句话听起来古里古怪，因为您只需要说：那方面我懂得不多，或者这方面我不在行，就行了。I am not really an expert in this area. if|5v^/
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13. 我没有男朋友。 }_zN%Tf~
I have no boyfriend. （fault) -@"3`uv"
I don't have a boyfriend. [+dCA
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14. 他的身体很健康。 E4892B:`
His body is healthy. （fault) q| 1%G Nb
He is in good health. You can also say: He抯 healthy. ~&D
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15. 价钱很昂贵/便宜。 C?gqX0[ q
The price is too expensive/cheap. （fault) HJ 7A/XW
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16. 我们下了车。 \#:
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17. 车速快了。 g]?pY
The speed of the car is fast. X1.-C@o
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18. 这个春节你回家吗？ `~)?OTzU#
Will you be going back home for the Spring Festival? ?DUim1KG
是的，我回去。Of course! （这一句是错的） HZRFE[ 9nb
当然。Sure. / Certainly.（这种说法是正确的） L?N&k zA
以英语为母语的人使用of course的频率要比中国的学生低得多，只有在回答一些众所周知的问题时才说of course。因为of course后面隐含的一句话是?当然我知道啦！难道我是一个傻瓜吗？?因此，of course带有挑衅的意味。在交谈时，用sure或certainly效果会好得多。同时，of course not也具挑衅的意味。正常情况下语气温和的说法是certainly not. aj;x:UqpJ
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19. 我觉得右手很疼。 M^:JhX{
I feel very painful in my right hand. !\R5/-_ UU
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20. 他看到她很惊讶。
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He looked at her and felt surprised. （fault) %eDSo9Y
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21. 我读过你的小说但是没料到你这么年轻。 @iuX~QA[9
I have read your novels but I didn't think you could be so young. （fault) :k1?I'q%
After having read your novel, I expected that you would be older. -#f.} H'
22. 她脸红了，让我看穿了她的心思。 TF :'6#p
Her red face made me see through her mind. （fault) hb3: ,c(
Correct: Her red face told me what she was thinking. g@>llv e{
23. 看到这幅画让我想到了我的童年时代。 '=E;^'Rl
The sight of these pictures made me remember my own childhood. u.X]K:Yow
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24. 别理她。 V0,J TWc
Don't pay attention to her. （fault) TS6xF?
Leave her alone. ,M3hE/rb/
25. 我在大学里学到了许多知识。 O00;0 w u
I get a lot of knowledge in the university. （fault) i&>^"_4 rc
I learned a lot in university. }jC O@v;
26. 黄山正在读书。 ({t^/b*8
Samuel is reading a book. （fault) +=E\sEe
Samuel is reading. \KhcNr?ja=
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28. 我遇到了很多困难。 vlkw Wm
I am having many difficulties. （fault) $8eiifj
I am having a few problems / lots of problems. ,@f"WrQ
29. 请快点走，否则我们会迟到的。 \HLo%]A@M
Please hurry to walk or well be late. （fault) ! lNyoX/
Please hurry up or well be late. ;
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30. 她由嫉妒转向失望。 vEg%ivj3
She was so jealous that she became desperate. （fault) Ak@! F6~
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