1. I very like it （Fault） mTbPz Z4
I like it very much. (true) YZJP7nN
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2. 这个价格对我挺合适的。 +N!{(R:"v}
The price is very suitable for me. （fault) yX mp] 9$
The price is right. Ct3 3S+y
Note：suitable(合适的、相配的)最常见的用法是以否定的形式出现在告示或通知上，如：下列节目儿童不宜。The following programme is not suitable for children在这组句子中用后面的说法会更合适。 j;vaNg|vQ
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3. 你是做什么工作的呢？ ?' :'zT
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Are you working at the moment? tq93 2M4
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这种说法难道也有毛病吗？是的。因为如果您的谈话对象刚刚失业，如此直接的问法会让对方有失面子，所以您要问：目前您是在上班吗？Are you working at the moment?接下来您才问：目前您在哪儿工作呢？Where are you working these days?或者您从事哪个行业呢？What line of work are you in?顺带说一下，回答这类问题时不妨说得具体一点，不要只是说经理或者秘书 #&gy@!a~
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4. 用英语怎么说？ B75SLK:h=
How to say? （fault) c9={~
How do you say this in English? Q&;qFv5-l
Note：How to say是在中国最为泛滥成灾的中国式英语之一，这决不是地道的英语说法。同样的句子有：请问这个词如何拼写？How do you spell that please?请问这个单词怎么读？How do you pronounce this word? tr+~@]I +
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5. 明天我有事情要做。 (9%%^s]uPT
I have something to do tomorrow? （fault) 0:S)2"I58p
Sorry but I am tied up all day tomorrow. j+_75t`AZ
用I have something to do来表示您很忙，这也完全是中国式的说法。因为每时每刻我们都有事情要做，躺在那里睡大觉也是事情。所以您可以说我很忙，脱不开身：I抦 tied up.还有其他的说法：I抦 I can't make it at that time. I'd love to, but I can't, I have to stay at home. *mt v[
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6. 我没有英文名。 zK;t041 e
I haven't English name. （fault) 351'l7F\
I don't have an English name. ?Fw/c0
Note：许多人讲英语犯这样的错误，从语法角度来分析，可能是语法功底欠缺，因为have在这里是实义动词，而并不是在现在完成时里面那个没有意义的助动词。所以，这句话由肯定句变成否定句要加助动词。 }_TdXY
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明白道理是一回事，习惯是另一回事，请您再说几话：我没有钱；I don't have any money.我没有兄弟姐妹；I don't have any brothers or sisters.我没有车。I don't have a car. 8h 2?Q
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7. 我想我不行。 ak&v/%N
I think I can't.（fault) hR{Zh>
I don't think I can. 5eJd$}Lbc
Note：这一组然是个习惯问题，在语法上称为否定前置，这就是汉语里面说?我想我不会?的时候，英语里面总是说?我不认为我会?。以后您在说类似的英语句子的时候，只要您留心，也会习惯英语的说法的。 6Z=H>w
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8. 我的舞也跳得不好。 =Q/i < u
I don't dance well too. （fault) exvsf|
I am not a very good dancer either. zt6ep=
Note：当我们说不擅长做什么事情的时候，英语里面通常用not good at something，英语的思维甚至直接踊跃到：我不是一个好的舞者。 \aozecpC`
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9. 现在几点钟了？ 85]UrwlA4
What time is it now? （fault) vZsVxx99
What time is it, please? aKZD4;
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10. 我的英语很糟糕。 %m`QnRX?D
My English is poor. （fault) ij^!TY[0
I am not 100% fluent, but at least I am improving. QkAwG[4
Note：有人开玩笑说，全中国人最擅长的一句英文是：My English is poor.实话说，我从来没有遇到一个美国人对我说：My Chinese is poor. 无论他们的汉语是好是坏，他们会说: I am still having a few problem, but I getting better. 64@s|m*
当您告诉外国人，您的英语很poor，so what(那又怎么样呢)，是要让别人当场施舍给我们一些英语呢，还是说我的英语不好，咱们不谈了吧。 r8$TT\?~
另外一个更大的弊端是，一边不停的学英语，一边不停地说自己的英语很poor,这正像有个人一边给车胎充气，又一边在车胎上扎孔放气。 QJ?!_2Ax
我坚信，先不谈别的，如果您现在就苦下功夫，把这本薄薄的《英语54321》吃通吃透，您的英语水平立即就会迅速的提高。所以您再也不用说：我的英语很poor. 5#PhaVc
您可以实事求是地说，我的英语还不算十分流利，但至少我在进步。 t p&iOP6O
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11. 你愿意参加我们的晚会吗？ J>Ha$1}u/
Would you like to join our party on Friday? （fault) f|)t[,c
Would you like to come to our party on Friday night? NST6pu\,U
Note：join往往是指参加俱乐部或者协会，如：join a health club; join the Communist Party.事实上，常常与party搭配的动词的come 或者go。如go a wild party，或者come to a Christmas Party。 03T.Owd
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12. 我没有经验。 Y@eUvz
I have no experience. （fault) L&%iY7sC`
I am I don't know much about that. /zK uVaC
Note：I have no experience这句话听起来古里古怪，因为您只需要说：那方面我懂得不多，或者这方面我不在行，就行了。I am not really an expert in this area. .S;/v--F
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13. 我没有男朋友。 V}?5=f'
I have no boyfriend. （fault) D Eh A8 .v
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14. 他的身体很健康。 E83nEUs
His body is healthy. （fault) C z%ih#^b
He is in good health. You can also say: He抯 healthy. |Sq>uC)
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15. 价钱很昂贵/便宜。 b :00w["
The price is too expensive/cheap. （fault) JZ
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The price is too high/ rather low. E%N ]t} }[
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16. 我们下了车。 `1gsrHi4N
We got off the car. 4j5 " {
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17. 车速快了。 o-_ a0j
The speed of the car is fast. -u{:39y{n
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18. 这个春节你回家吗？ &V$R@~ x
Will you be going back home for the Spring Festival? $}@l l^
是的，我回去。Of course! （这一句是错的） Yc}b&
当然。Sure. / Certainly.（这种说法是正确的） WD:5C3;
以英语为母语的人使用of course的频率要比中国的学生低得多，只有在回答一些众所周知的问题时才说of course。因为of course后面隐含的一句话是?当然我知道啦！难道我是一个傻瓜吗？?因此，of course带有挑衅的意味。在交谈时，用sure或certainly效果会好得多。同时，of course not也具挑衅的意味。正常情况下语气温和的说法是certainly not. 9 )qx0
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19. 我觉得右手很疼。 e9hQJ
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I feel very painful in my right hand. s#ykD{ Z
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20. 他看到她很惊讶。 /VQ<}S[k}-
He looked at her and felt surprised. （fault) x,+zw9
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21. 我读过你的小说但是没料到你这么年轻。 AyUVsIuPT=
I have read your novels but I didn't think you could be so young. （fault) vjb{h'v
After having read your novel, I expected that you would be older. B4C`3@a
22. 她脸红了，让我看穿了她的心思。 $Fj7'@1(
Her red face made me see through her mind. （fault) =z+zg^wsT
Correct: Her red face told me what she was thinking. {<lV=0]
23. 看到这幅画让我想到了我的童年时代。 Qa=;Elp:[
The sight of these pictures made me remember my own childhood. ?QgWW
Correct: Seeing these pictures reminded me of my own childhood. e M}Xn^}
24. 别理她。 _F9
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Don't pay attention to her. （fault) ;%}
Leave her alone. ,aeFEsi
25. 我在大学里学到了许多知识。 q!n|Ju<
I get a lot of knowledge in the university. （fault) 4{V =X3,x
I learned a lot in university. <Ip}uy [Y
26. 黄山正在读书。 j, Y=GjfGM
Samuel is reading a book. （fault) W$W7U|Z9y+
Samuel is reading. chy7hPxC;
27. exciting / excited。 )u$A!+fo
28. 我遇到了很多困难。 N.]8qzW
I am having many difficulties. （fault) N^ )OlH
I am having a few problems / lots of problems. ZHT.+X:_
29. 请快点走，否则我们会迟到的。 xAI<<[-
Please hurry to walk or well be late. （fault) <}ev Ow2
Please hurry up or well be late. ][Kj^7/
30. 她由嫉妒转向失望。 kF ?\p`[a
She was so jealous that she became desperate. （fault) UU_k"D~
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