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2. 这个价格对我挺合适的。
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The price is very suitable for me. （fault) o.3YM.B#
The price is right. ]]=fA 4(
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这种说法难道也有毛病吗？是的。因为如果您的谈话对象刚刚失业，如此直接的问法会让对方有失面子，所以您要问：目前您是在上班吗？Are you working at the moment?接下来您才问：目前您在哪儿工作呢？Where are you working these days?或者您从事哪个行业呢？What line of work are you in?顺带说一下，回答这类问题时不妨说得具体一点，不要只是说经理或者秘书 4 %)N(%u
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5. 明天我有事情要做。 h !G^dW.
I have something to do tomorrow? （fault) ^@`e
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用I have something to do来表示您很忙，这也完全是中国式的说法。因为每时每刻我们都有事情要做，躺在那里睡大觉也是事情。所以您可以说我很忙，脱不开身：I抦 tied up.还有其他的说法：I抦 I can't make it at that time. I'd love to, but I can't, I have to stay at home. z {pC7e5
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I don't have an English name. %U5P}
Note：许多人讲英语犯这样的错误，从语法角度来分析，可能是语法功底欠缺，因为have在这里是实义动词，而并不是在现在完成时里面那个没有意义的助动词。所以，这句话由肯定句变成否定句要加助动词。 xshAr J&A
明白道理是一回事，习惯是另一回事，请您再说几话：我没有钱；I don't have any money.我没有兄弟姐妹；I don't have any brothers or sisters.我没有车。I don't have a car. 8VuZ,!WH#
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7. 我想我不行。 =,4
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I don't think I can. aM{@1m Bm
Note：这一组然是个习惯问题，在语法上称为否定前置，这就是汉语里面说?我想我不会?的时候，英语里面总是说?我不认为我会?。以后您在说类似的英语句子的时候，只要您留心，也会习惯英语的说法的。 8pk#s J51
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8. 我的舞也跳得不好。 8wX+ZL: 9
I don't dance well too. （fault) yS)- &t!;
I am not a very good dancer either. Q^lQi\[
Note：当我们说不擅长做什么事情的时候，英语里面通常用not good at something，英语的思维甚至直接踊跃到：我不是一个好的舞者。 kOAY@a
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9. 现在几点钟了？ B)r r7B
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What time is it, please? VX;zZ`BJ
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10. 我的英语很糟糕。 G(As%r]
My English is poor. （fault) GG_^K#*
I am not 100% fluent, but at least I am improving.
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Note：有人开玩笑说，全中国人最擅长的一句英文是：My English is poor.实话说，我从来没有遇到一个美国人对我说：My Chinese is poor. 无论他们的汉语是好是坏，他们会说: I am still having a few problem, but I getting better. *M w fod
当您告诉外国人，您的英语很poor，so what(那又怎么样呢)，是要让别人当场施舍给我们一些英语呢，还是说我的英语不好，咱们不谈了吧。 #d Z/UM(u
另外一个更大的弊端是，一边不停的学英语，一边不停地说自己的英语很poor,这正像有个人一边给车胎充气，又一边在车胎上扎孔放气。 M'umoZmW0
我坚信，先不谈别的，如果您现在就苦下功夫，把这本薄薄的《英语54321》吃通吃透，您的英语水平立即就会迅速的提高。所以您再也不用说：我的英语很poor. QJ#u[hsMFp
您可以实事求是地说，我的英语还不算十分流利，但至少我在进步。 &nqdl+ |G*
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11. 你愿意参加我们的晚会吗？ NtY*sUKRD
Would you like to join our party on Friday? （fault) 9fP) Fwih
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Note：join往往是指参加俱乐部或者协会，如：join a health club; join the Communist Party.事实上，常常与party搭配的动词的come 或者go。如go a wild party，或者come to a Christmas Party。 }dX/Y /
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12. 我没有经验。 4ZI!,lv*
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13. 我没有男朋友。 'Aj(i/CM
I have no boyfriend. （fault) >f\zCT%cf
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14. 他的身体很健康。 -`!_ h[
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15. 价钱很昂贵/便宜。 )L |tn
The price is too expensive/cheap. （fault) vpm ]9>1[
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16. 我们下了车。 Nush`?]J"_
We got off the car. cQT1Xi
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17. 车速快了。 ~`t%M?l
The speed of the car is fast. qyg*n>nt
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18. 这个春节你回家吗？ ~ HK1X
Will you be going back home for the Spring Festival? 8[{|xh(
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以英语为母语的人使用of course的频率要比中国的学生低得多，只有在回答一些众所周知的问题时才说of course。因为of course后面隐含的一句话是?当然我知道啦！难道我是一个傻瓜吗？?因此，of course带有挑衅的意味。在交谈时，用sure或certainly效果会好得多。同时，of course not也具挑衅的意味。正常情况下语气温和的说法是certainly not. WP0 #i~3*
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19. 我觉得右手很疼。 Z#-k.|}
I feel very painful in my right hand. `n
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20. 他看到她很惊讶。 M#OH Y *
He looked at her and felt surprised. （fault) /Q?~Q0{)es
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21. 我读过你的小说但是没料到你这么年轻。 )xB$LJM8
I have read your novels but I didn't think you could be so young. （fault) dh&W; zs
After having read your novel, I expected that you would be older. 2m_'z
22. 她脸红了，让我看穿了她的心思。 1"}B]5!
Her red face made me see through her mind. （fault) br0u@G
Correct: Her red face told me what she was thinking. p? Ed-
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23. 看到这幅画让我想到了我的童年时代。 sFLcOPj -%
The sight of these pictures made me remember my own childhood. Hqvc7 -c6
Correct: Seeing these pictures reminded me of my own childhood. k}D[Hp:m
24. 别理她。 _yj1:TtCNT
Don't pay attention to her. （fault) 4,2(nYF
Leave her alone. BwC<rOU
25. 我在大学里学到了许多知识。 |*:tyP%m^
I get a lot of knowledge in the university. （fault) 5k69F
I learned a lot in university. RCI4~q
26. 黄山正在读书。 aH%ZetLNJ
Samuel is reading a book. （fault) E;6~R M:
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28. 我遇到了很多困难。 ?VB#GJ0M9
I am having many difficulties. （fault) eGLO!DdxZ
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29. 请快点走，否则我们会迟到的。 k, f)2<
Please hurry to walk or well be late. （fault) oEJaH
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30. 她由嫉妒转向失望。 RI-A"cc6A
She was so jealous that she became desperate. （fault) }2l O _i}L
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