1. I very like it （Fault） AffVah2o:
I like it very much. (true) &2IrST{d:V
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2. 这个价格对我挺合适的。 :K&>
The price is very suitable for me. （fault) 62lG,y_L
The price is right. mUW|4zl i}
Note：suitable(合适的、相配的)最常见的用法是以否定的形式出现在告示或通知上，如：下列节目儿童不宜。The following programme is not suitable for children在这组句子中用后面的说法会更合适。 XQL"D)fw
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4. 用英语怎么说？ -L e:%q2
How to say? （fault) FlJ(V
How do you say this in English? AQkH3p/W
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5. 明天我有事情要做。 mD }&X7
I have something to do tomorrow? （fault) B.w ihJVDg
Sorry but I am tied up all day tomorrow. V_Z ~$
用I have something to do来表示您很忙，这也完全是中国式的说法。因为每时每刻我们都有事情要做，躺在那里睡大觉也是事情。所以您可以说我很忙，脱不开身：I抦 tied up.还有其他的说法：I抦 I can't make it at that time. I'd love to, but I can't, I have to stay at home. MgJiJ0y
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6. 我没有英文名。 +g36,!q
I haven't English name. （fault) 'Okitq+O
I don't have an English name. ! K? o H
Note：许多人讲英语犯这样的错误，从语法角度来分析，可能是语法功底欠缺，因为have在这里是实义动词，而并不是在现在完成时里面那个没有意义的助动词。所以，这句话由肯定句变成否定句要加助动词。 9>~UqP9
明白道理是一回事，习惯是另一回事，请您再说几话：我没有钱；I don't have any money.我没有兄弟姐妹；I don't have any brothers or sisters.我没有车。I don't have a car. hKq <e%oVH
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7. 我想我不行。 j" wX7
I think I can't.（fault) s+Qm/ h2
I don't think I can. Mazjn?f
Note：这一组然是个习惯问题，在语法上称为否定前置，这就是汉语里面说?我想我不会?的时候，英语里面总是说?我不认为我会?。以后您在说类似的英语句子的时候，只要您留心，也会习惯英语的说法的。 }`k >6B
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8. 我的舞也跳得不好。 8joJ e>9VJ
I don't dance well too. （fault) zTi %j$o
I am not a very good dancer either. ;)Rvk&J5
Note：当我们说不擅长做什么事情的时候，英语里面通常用not good at something，英语的思维甚至直接踊跃到：我不是一个好的舞者。 |k5uVhN
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9. 现在几点钟了？ [@D+kL*>
What time is it now? （fault) v4]7"7GuW
What time is it, please? Qx,?v|Xg
Note：What time is it now这是一个直接从汉语翻译过的句子，讲英语的时候没有必要说now,因为您不可能问what time was it yesterday, 或者what time is it tomorrow?所以符合英语习惯的说法是：请问现在几点了？还有一种说法是：How are we doing for time?这句话在有时间限制的时候特别合适 V0hC[Ilr
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10. 我的英语很糟糕。 Bi?.w5
My English is poor. （fault) fsc^8
I am not 100% fluent, but at least I am improving. ?D P]#9 /4
Note：有人开玩笑说，全中国人最擅长的一句英文是：My English is poor.实话说，我从来没有遇到一个美国人对我说：My Chinese is poor. 无论他们的汉语是好是坏，他们会说: I am still having a few problem, but I getting better. ;{b 1'
当您告诉外国人，您的英语很poor，so what(那又怎么样呢)，是要让别人当场施舍给我们一些英语呢，还是说我的英语不好，咱们不谈了吧。 $ijWwrh
另外一个更大的弊端是，一边不停的学英语，一边不停地说自己的英语很poor,这正像有个人一边给车胎充气，又一边在车胎上扎孔放气。 :@LFNcWE
我坚信，先不谈别的，如果您现在就苦下功夫，把这本薄薄的《英语54321》吃通吃透，您的英语水平立即就会迅速的提高。所以您再也不用说：我的英语很poor. I"awvUP]a[
您可以实事求是地说，我的英语还不算十分流利，但至少我在进步。 TTjj.fq6
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11. 你愿意参加我们的晚会吗？ SI_{%~k*B
Would you like to join our party on Friday? （fault) M$O}roOa
Would you like to come to our party on Friday night? $<^4G
Note：join往往是指参加俱乐部或者协会，如：join a health club; join the Communist Party.事实上，常常与party搭配的动词的come 或者go。如go a wild party，或者come to a Christmas Party。 ]'Y
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12. 我没有经验。 ;)ff Gg>
I have no experience. （fault) K{[yS B
I am I don't know much about that. )W^Wqa8mG|
Note：I have no experience这句话听起来古里古怪，因为您只需要说：那方面我懂得不多，或者这方面我不在行，就行了。I am not really an expert in this area. ,aI 6P-
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13. 我没有男朋友。 }9T$ XF~
I have no boyfriend. （fault) G'c!82;,?
I don't have a boyfriend. `5}XmSJ?5
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14. 他的身体很健康。 ju8mO&
His body is healthy. （fault) =x
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He is in good health. You can also say: He抯 healthy. 2!QS&i
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15. 价钱很昂贵/便宜。 c_b^t09
The price is too expensive/cheap. （fault) ?8 wFT!J
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16. 我们下了车。 CL/8p;
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17. 车速快了。 (bH*i\W
The speed of the car is fast. [sG=(~BU
The car is speeding. Or 揟he car is going too fast.? WE$Pi;q1
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18. 这个春节你回家吗？ Ikiv+Fq(
Will you be going back home for the Spring Festival? k>#,1GbNZy
是的，我回去。Of course! （这一句是错的） , 2u-<8
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以英语为母语的人使用of course的频率要比中国的学生低得多，只有在回答一些众所周知的问题时才说of course。因为of course后面隐含的一句话是?当然我知道啦！难道我是一个傻瓜吗？?因此，of course带有挑衅的意味。在交谈时，用sure或certainly效果会好得多。同时，of course not也具挑衅的意味。正常情况下语气温和的说法是certainly not. 4)Y=)#=
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19. 我觉得右手很疼。 P\bW k p0
I feel very painful in my right hand. <~# ZtD$G
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20. 他看到她很惊讶。 GIQ/gM?Pv
He looked at her and felt surprised. （fault) ji {V#
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21. 我读过你的小说但是没料到你这么年轻。 E ugt~j3
I have read your novels but I didn't think you could be so young. （fault) \2i4]V
After having read your novel, I expected that you would be older. jTk !wm=
22. 她脸红了，让我看穿了她的心思。 * %5#\ I
Her red face made me see through her mind. （fault) 2#'{Q4K
Correct: Her red face told me what she was thinking. ehj&A+Ip
23. 看到这幅画让我想到了我的童年时代。 "PGEiLY
The sight of these pictures made me remember my own childhood. ==I:>+_ ^|
Correct: Seeing these pictures reminded me of my own childhood. _5#f9,m1
24. 别理她。 ]t_AXKd
Don't pay attention to her. （fault) (_-<3)q4
Leave her alone. !pl<
25. 我在大学里学到了许多知识。 *{:FPmDU
I get a lot of knowledge in the university. （fault) }_}C ^
I learned a lot in university. (A`/3A q+
26. 黄山正在读书。 M$A"<5
Samuel is reading a book. （fault) 1fwCQM
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28. 我遇到了很多困难。 ;<0Q<0G
I am having many difficulties. （fault) bnLvJ]i)
I am having a few problems / lots of problems. 5T}$+R0&
29. 请快点走，否则我们会迟到的。 hX\XNiCiK8
Please hurry to walk or well be late. （fault) dUeM+ (s1
Please hurry up or well be late. UzFd@W u#
30. 她由嫉妒转向失望。 AR'q2/ cw
She was so jealous that she became desperate. （fault) [La=z 7*
Jealousy drove her to despair. esmQ \QQ^1
