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2. 这个价格对我挺合适的。 TIR Is1
The price is very suitable for me. （fault) 6`bR'
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3. 你是做什么工作的呢？ i}i >ho-8
What's your job? （fault) ]mUt[Yy:z
Are you working at the moment? a2kAZCQ
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这种说法难道也有毛病吗？是的。因为如果您的谈话对象刚刚失业，如此直接的问法会让对方有失面子，所以您要问：目前您是在上班吗？Are you working at the moment?接下来您才问：目前您在哪儿工作呢？Where are you working these days?或者您从事哪个行业呢？What line of work are you in?顺带说一下，回答这类问题时不妨说得具体一点，不要只是说经理或者秘书 fakad#O
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4. 用英语怎么说？ bNiJ"k<pN
How to say? （fault) %6m' |(-
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5. 明天我有事情要做。 <RY ! Mc
I have something to do tomorrow? （fault) J #t8x L
Sorry but I am tied up all day tomorrow. 0>]&9'cn
用I have something to do来表示您很忙，这也完全是中国式的说法。因为每时每刻我们都有事情要做，躺在那里睡大觉也是事情。所以您可以说我很忙，脱不开身：I抦 tied up.还有其他的说法：I抦 I can't make it at that time. I'd love to, but I can't, I have to stay at home. \ pTv;(
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6. 我没有英文名。 oDJ
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I haven't English name. （fault)
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I don't have an English name. H~SU:B:
Note：许多人讲英语犯这样的错误，从语法角度来分析，可能是语法功底欠缺，因为have在这里是实义动词，而并不是在现在完成时里面那个没有意义的助动词。所以，这句话由肯定句变成否定句要加助动词。 :}/\hz
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明白道理是一回事，习惯是另一回事，请您再说几话：我没有钱；I don't have any money.我没有兄弟姐妹；I don't have any brothers or sisters.我没有车。I don't have a car. Aayd3Ph0%
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7. 我想我不行。 o@]n<ZYo
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I don't think I can. V[kn'QkWv
Note：这一组然是个习惯问题，在语法上称为否定前置，这就是汉语里面说?我想我不会?的时候，英语里面总是说?我不认为我会?。以后您在说类似的英语句子的时候，只要您留心，也会习惯英语的说法的。 }d iE'
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8. 我的舞也跳得不好。 +aPe)U<t
I don't dance well too. （fault) yOvV"x]
I am not a very good dancer either. 8>D*U0sNl
Note：当我们说不擅长做什么事情的时候，英语里面通常用not good at something，英语的思维甚至直接踊跃到：我不是一个好的舞者。 v0tFU!Q%
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9. 现在几点钟了？ D`X<b4e8/
What time is it now? （fault) _ bg Zl
What time is it, please? R!WDQGR(2
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10. 我的英语很糟糕。 6c /0OM #
My English is poor. （fault) aRI. &3-
I am not 100% fluent, but at least I am improving. X*d!A
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Note：有人开玩笑说，全中国人最擅长的一句英文是：My English is poor.实话说，我从来没有遇到一个美国人对我说：My Chinese is poor. 无论他们的汉语是好是坏，他们会说: I am still having a few problem, but I getting better. .h4Z\R`
当您告诉外国人，您的英语很poor，so what(那又怎么样呢)，是要让别人当场施舍给我们一些英语呢，还是说我的英语不好，咱们不谈了吧。 /6yVbo "
另外一个更大的弊端是，一边不停的学英语，一边不停地说自己的英语很poor,这正像有个人一边给车胎充气，又一边在车胎上扎孔放气。 S1'?"zAmd
我坚信，先不谈别的，如果您现在就苦下功夫，把这本薄薄的《英语54321》吃通吃透，您的英语水平立即就会迅速的提高。所以您再也不用说：我的英语很poor. ) =x4+)9
您可以实事求是地说，我的英语还不算十分流利，但至少我在进步。 3webAaO
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11. 你愿意参加我们的晚会吗？ )`\Q/TMl5
Would you like to join our party on Friday? （fault) O&~
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Would you like to come to our party on Friday night? DRXUQ H
Note：join往往是指参加俱乐部或者协会，如：join a health club; join the Communist Party.事实上，常常与party搭配的动词的come 或者go。如go a wild party，或者come to a Christmas Party。 yv>uzb`N
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12. 我没有经验。 9Av{>W?
I have no experience. （fault) q D=b+\F
I am I don't know much about that. b].U/=Hs
Note：I have no experience这句话听起来古里古怪，因为您只需要说：那方面我懂得不多，或者这方面我不在行，就行了。I am not really an expert in this area.
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13. 我没有男朋友。 Nl% 5O Bm
I have no boyfriend. （fault) H$Pf$D$
I don't have a boyfriend. CtD<% v3`
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14. 他的身体很健康。 `zl,|}u)
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15. 价钱很昂贵/便宜。 [O!/hppN
The price is too expensive/cheap. （fault) ~HT:BO$
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16. 我们下了车。 aM,g@'.=
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We got out of the car. s=E6HP@q
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17. 车速快了。 EU H9R8)
The speed of the car is fast. 8. +f@wv
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18. 这个春节你回家吗？ X`eX +9
Will you be going back home for the Spring Festival? fL SDt(c',
是的，我回去。Of course! （这一句是错的） (r}StR+
当然。Sure. / Certainly.（这种说法是正确的） O(.eHZ=
以英语为母语的人使用of course的频率要比中国的学生低得多，只有在回答一些众所周知的问题时才说of course。因为of course后面隐含的一句话是?当然我知道啦！难道我是一个傻瓜吗？?因此，of course带有挑衅的意味。在交谈时，用sure或certainly效果会好得多。同时，of course not也具挑衅的意味。正常情况下语气温和的说法是certainly not. &f? JtpB
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19. 我觉得右手很疼。 29|nt1 Z
I feel very painful in my right hand. %.\+ j ,G7
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20. 他看到她很惊讶。 p_apVm\t_
He looked at her and felt surprised. （fault) +G7[(Wz(z
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21. 我读过你的小说但是没料到你这么年轻。 JP gFTr
I have read your novels but I didn't think you could be so young. （fault) o4z|XhLr
After having read your novel, I expected that you would be older. R /_vJHI
22. 她脸红了，让我看穿了她的心思。 92b}N|u
Her red face made me see through her mind. （fault) Tpkt'|8
Correct: Her red face told me what she was thinking. ~52'iI)Mw
23. 看到这幅画让我想到了我的童年时代。 ozHL'H
The sight of these pictures made me remember my own childhood. r ]~]-VZ/
Correct: Seeing these pictures reminded me of my own childhood. ;\ j'~AyCn
24. 别理她。 7W&XcF
Don't pay attention to her. （fault) j^f54Ky.
Leave her alone. &Fk|"f+
25. 我在大学里学到了许多知识。 vJx( lU`Y
I get a lot of knowledge in the university. （fault) RcO.1@2
I learned a lot in university. WBz PSnS2
26. 黄山正在读书。 X~\ O]
Samuel is reading a book. （fault) {sq:vu@NC
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28. 我遇到了很多困难。 W3%RB [s-
I am having many difficulties. （fault) X >]<rEh
I am having a few problems / lots of problems. 6W;`}'ap
29. 请快点走，否则我们会迟到的。 dWhqu68_
Please hurry to walk or well be late. （fault) ;~`/rh
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Please hurry up or well be late. TKEcbGhy
30. 她由嫉妒转向失望。 v9t'CMU
She was so jealous that she became desperate. （fault) ,t'"3<^Jg
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