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2. 这个价格对我挺合适的。 O&gwr
The price is very suitable for me. （fault) 9[p }.9 /
The price is right. ~I \r1Wj;
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3. 你是做什么工作的呢？ !
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Are you working at the moment? oyN+pFVB:$
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这种说法难道也有毛病吗？是的。因为如果您的谈话对象刚刚失业，如此直接的问法会让对方有失面子，所以您要问：目前您是在上班吗？Are you working at the moment?接下来您才问：目前您在哪儿工作呢？Where are you working these days?或者您从事哪个行业呢？What line of work are you in?顺带说一下，回答这类问题时不妨说得具体一点，不要只是说经理或者秘书 /cL9 ?k;o
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4. 用英语怎么说？ I6 hhU;)C
How to say? （fault) TtwJ,&b
How do you say this in English? O5 TK&j
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5. 明天我有事情要做。 SEQO2`]e:
I have something to do tomorrow? （fault) bm tJU3Rm
Sorry but I am tied up all day tomorrow. ?mYV\kDt\
用I have something to do来表示您很忙，这也完全是中国式的说法。因为每时每刻我们都有事情要做，躺在那里睡大觉也是事情。所以您可以说我很忙，脱不开身：I抦 tied up.还有其他的说法：I抦 I can't make it at that time. I'd love to, but I can't, I have to stay at home. j |'# 5H`
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6. 我没有英文名。 mU?&\ w=v$
I haven't English name. （fault) 3\p]esse
I don't have an English name. p~, 3A:i
Note：许多人讲英语犯这样的错误，从语法角度来分析，可能是语法功底欠缺，因为have在这里是实义动词，而并不是在现在完成时里面那个没有意义的助动词。所以，这句话由肯定句变成否定句要加助动词。 zfjD b
明白道理是一回事，习惯是另一回事，请您再说几话：我没有钱；I don't have any money.我没有兄弟姐妹；I don't have any brothers or sisters.我没有车。I don't have a car. t)oES>W1
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7. 我想我不行。 K^,&ub.L)
I think I can't.（fault) cu479VzPx:
I don't think I can. Ql#W
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Note：这一组然是个习惯问题，在语法上称为否定前置，这就是汉语里面说?我想我不会?的时候，英语里面总是说?我不认为我会?。以后您在说类似的英语句子的时候，只要您留心，也会习惯英语的说法的。 1(:b{Bl
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8. 我的舞也跳得不好。 U= c5 zrs
I don't dance well too. （fault) ^b"x| 8
I am not a very good dancer either. OP|.I._I
Note：当我们说不擅长做什么事情的时候，英语里面通常用not good at something，英语的思维甚至直接踊跃到：我不是一个好的舞者。 xyS2_ Q
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9. 现在几点钟了？ VR d:2uDS
What time is it now? （fault) 2w x[D
What time is it, please? [L*[j.r7[
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10. 我的英语很糟糕。 NWQPOq#
My English is poor. （fault) 4uO
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I am not 100% fluent, but at least I am improving. 2[8fFo>
Note：有人开玩笑说，全中国人最擅长的一句英文是：My English is poor.实话说，我从来没有遇到一个美国人对我说：My Chinese is poor. 无论他们的汉语是好是坏，他们会说: I am still having a few problem, but I getting better. de=5=>P7
当您告诉外国人，您的英语很poor，so what(那又怎么样呢)，是要让别人当场施舍给我们一些英语呢，还是说我的英语不好，咱们不谈了吧。 U5On-T5
另外一个更大的弊端是，一边不停的学英语，一边不停地说自己的英语很poor,这正像有个人一边给车胎充气，又一边在车胎上扎孔放气。 g/U$!d_
我坚信，先不谈别的，如果您现在就苦下功夫，把这本薄薄的《英语54321》吃通吃透，您的英语水平立即就会迅速的提高。所以您再也不用说：我的英语很poor. 9{9#AI.G
您可以实事求是地说，我的英语还不算十分流利，但至少我在进步。 }j5R@I6P
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Would you like to join our party on Friday? （fault) {p#l!P/
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12. 我没有经验。 rS F;Lp)}
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I am I don't know much about that. /^z/]!JG:V
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13. 我没有男朋友。 VeNNsg>&
I have no boyfriend. （fault) Y'<uZl^aX
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14. 他的身体很健康。 v|4 STR
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The price is too expensive/cheap. （fault) A=v lC?&Z
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16. 我们下了车。 f H#F"^ A
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17. 车速快了。 z`86-Ov
The speed of the car is fast. B&%L`v2[
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18. 这个春节你回家吗？ LT,iS)dY+
Will you be going back home for the Spring Festival? a gmeiJT
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以英语为母语的人使用of course的频率要比中国的学生低得多，只有在回答一些众所周知的问题时才说of course。因为of course后面隐含的一句话是?当然我知道啦！难道我是一个傻瓜吗？?因此，of course带有挑衅的意味。在交谈时，用sure或certainly效果会好得多。同时，of course not也具挑衅的意味。正常情况下语气温和的说法是certainly not. lgCHGv2@
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19. 我觉得右手很疼。 Hl^aUp.c
I feel very painful in my right hand. h"VpQhi
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20. 他看到她很惊讶。 Dh\S`nfFq
He looked at her and felt surprised. （fault) "B|nh d
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21. 我读过你的小说但是没料到你这么年轻。 26\HV
I have read your novels but I didn't think you could be so young. （fault) /gqqKUx
After having read your novel, I expected that you would be older. ESC
22. 她脸红了，让我看穿了她的心思。 ql{^"8x
Her red face made me see through her mind. （fault) =R8f)UQYx
Correct: Her red face told me what she was thinking. 8F O1`%8Oe
23. 看到这幅画让我想到了我的童年时代。 $Q`yNEc
The sight of these pictures made me remember my own childhood. -,K*~ z.l
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24. 别理她。 Ap
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Don't pay attention to her. （fault) =,&u_>Dp
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25. 我在大学里学到了许多知识。 ^#a#<8Jz
I get a lot of knowledge in the university. （fault) SBCL1aM
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26. 黄山正在读书。 ]yyU)V0Iu
Samuel is reading a book. （fault) ]uB T &
Samuel is reading. /p"U
27. exciting / excited。 S2koXg(
28. 我遇到了很多困难。 HO 266M
I am having many difficulties. （fault) ucQezmie
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29. 请快点走，否则我们会迟到的。 M *g2VyZ
Please hurry to walk or well be late. （fault) O]e6i%?
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30. 她由嫉妒转向失望。 ]h #WkcXQ
She was so jealous that she became desperate. （fault) GIl:3iB49
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