1. I very like it （Fault） )% !X,
I like it very much. (true) W`n_m&Y\
.=c@ps
2. 这个价格对我挺合适的。 >g [Wnzf
The price is very suitable for me. （fault) DFGgyF ay
The price is right. -**fT?n
Note：suitable(合适的、相配的)最常见的用法是以否定的形式出现在告示或通知上，如：下列节目儿童不宜。The following programme is not suitable for children在这组句子中用后面的说法会更合适。 %]O #t<D
]7h;MR
3. 你是做什么工作的呢？ !W=2ZlzS
What's your job? （fault) vha@YPC=
Are you working at the moment? A {')
Note：what's your job , -Lv 3
这种说法难道也有毛病吗？是的。因为如果您的谈话对象刚刚失业，如此直接的问法会让对方有失面子，所以您要问：目前您是在上班吗？Are you working at the moment?接下来您才问：目前您在哪儿工作呢？Where are you working these days?或者您从事哪个行业呢？What line of work are you in?顺带说一下，回答这类问题时不妨说得具体一点，不要只是说经理或者秘书 |:SXN4';?
i'#%t/ u
4. 用英语怎么说？ v\kd78,
How to say? （fault) V<REcII.
How do you say this in English? >rh< %55P`
Note：How to say是在中国最为泛滥成灾的中国式英语之一，这决不是地道的英语说法。同样的句子有：请问这个词如何拼写？How do you spell that please?请问这个单词怎么读？How do you pronounce this word? % g4)f9>
Q?9e u%G6I
5. 明天我有事情要做。 _&xkj8O
I have something to do tomorrow? （fault) fAvB!e
Sorry but I am tied up all day tomorrow. HlX7A 1i/
用I have something to do来表示您很忙，这也完全是中国式的说法。因为每时每刻我们都有事情要做，躺在那里睡大觉也是事情。所以您可以说我很忙，脱不开身：I抦 tied up.还有其他的说法：I抦 I can't make it at that time. I'd love to, but I can't, I have to stay at home. VAa;XVmB
&0-Pl.M
6. 我没有英文名。 H{Na'_sL
I haven't English name. （fault) 27H4en; o=
I don't have an English name. dBW#PRg
Note：许多人讲英语犯这样的错误，从语法角度来分析，可能是语法功底欠缺，因为have在这里是实义动词，而并不是在现在完成时里面那个没有意义的助动词。所以，这句话由肯定句变成否定句要加助动词。 <5sfII
明白道理是一回事，习惯是另一回事，请您再说几话：我没有钱；I don't have any money.我没有兄弟姐妹；I don't have any brothers or sisters.我没有车。I don't have a car. c;R .rV<
8EI& }I
7. 我想我不行。 a+\s 0Qo<
I think I can't.（fault) P$G|o|h
I don't think I can. Mz6|#P}.s
Note：这一组然是个习惯问题，在语法上称为否定前置，这就是汉语里面说?我想我不会?的时候，英语里面总是说?我不认为我会?。以后您在说类似的英语句子的时候，只要您留心，也会习惯英语的说法的。 Z ?w= -
UX'tdB
!A
8. 我的舞也跳得不好。 @gJPMgF$F
I don't dance well too. （fault) aII:Pzh]B
I am not a very good dancer either. _LZ 442
Note：当我们说不擅长做什么事情的时候，英语里面通常用not good at something，英语的思维甚至直接踊跃到：我不是一个好的舞者。 Je`
w/Hl/U
Q9t.*+
9. 现在几点钟了？ "S&1J8D|
What time is it now? （fault) }HZ'i;~r|9
What time is it, please? nSU7,K`PM
Note：What time is it now这是一个直接从汉语翻译过的句子，讲英语的时候没有必要说now,因为您不可能问what time was it yesterday, 或者what time is it tomorrow?所以符合英语习惯的说法是：请问现在几点了？还有一种说法是：How are we doing for time?这句话在有时间限制的时候特别合适 W @FGU
c<qJs-C4;
10. 我的英语很糟糕。 k${F7I(Tb
My English is poor. （fault) * km - pp
I am not 100% fluent, but at least I am improving. j Y\YSQ
Note：有人开玩笑说，全中国人最擅长的一句英文是：My English is poor.实话说，我从来没有遇到一个美国人对我说：My Chinese is poor. 无论他们的汉语是好是坏，他们会说: I am still having a few problem, but I getting better. vYG$>*
当您告诉外国人，您的英语很poor，so what(那又怎么样呢)，是要让别人当场施舍给我们一些英语呢，还是说我的英语不好，咱们不谈了吧。 Aj=c,]2
另外一个更大的弊端是，一边不停的学英语，一边不停地说自己的英语很poor,这正像有个人一边给车胎充气，又一边在车胎上扎孔放气。 Cd7d-'EQn
我坚信，先不谈别的，如果您现在就苦下功夫，把这本薄薄的《英语54321》吃通吃透，您的英语水平立即就会迅速的提高。所以您再也不用说：我的英语很poor. 5c l%>U
您可以实事求是地说，我的英语还不算十分流利，但至少我在进步。 !E\J`K0_e
SCMZ-^b
11. 你愿意参加我们的晚会吗？ GJuU?h#:/{
Would you like to join our party on Friday? （fault) ;V1e>?3
Would you like to come to our party on Friday night? % ! )Dk<
Note：join往往是指参加俱乐部或者协会，如：join a health club; join the Communist Party.事实上，常常与party搭配的动词的come 或者go。如go a wild party，或者come to a Christmas Party。 ,u>K##X\
-QP1Se*#
12. 我没有经验。 gH/k}M7tA#
I have no experience. （fault) ) $I"LyK)
I am I don't know much about that. ~bJ*LM?wOP
Note：I have no experience这句话听起来古里古怪，因为您只需要说：那方面我懂得不多，或者这方面我不在行，就行了。I am not really an expert in this area. ]5J*UZ}
R
)e^H
13. 我没有男朋友。 885
,3AdA
I have no boyfriend. （fault) CB?H`R pC.
I don't have a boyfriend. (fWQ?6[
y]f| U-f:~
14. 他的身体很健康。 px_%5^zRQ
His body is healthy. （fault) BRMR>
~k(
He is in good health. You can also say: He抯 healthy. C/pu]%n@4
~w R ozV
15. 价钱很昂贵/便宜。 Z7R+'OC
The price is too expensive/cheap. （fault) 4'#
_b
The price is too high/ rather low. OKzk\F6
Gp M_ Qp
16. 我们下了车。 J)Td'iT(
We got off the car. )F35WP~
We got out of the car. =").W \,
eM`"$xc
Oe
17. 车速快了。 aA.TlG@zP
The speed of the car is fast. sFxciCpN
The car is speeding. Or 揟he car is going too fast.? "'"dc A
#/`V.jXt>
18. 这个春节你回家吗？ P(Hh%9'(
Will you be going back home for the Spring Festival? ZCV N+::Y
是的，我回去。Of course! （这一句是错的） :YZMR JL
当然。Sure. / Certainly.（这种说法是正确的） l,3[hx
以英语为母语的人使用of course的频率要比中国的学生低得多，只有在回答一些众所周知的问题时才说of course。因为of course后面隐含的一句话是?当然我知道啦！难道我是一个傻瓜吗？?因此，of course带有挑衅的意味。在交谈时，用sure或certainly效果会好得多。同时，of course not也具挑衅的意味。正常情况下语气温和的说法是certainly not. 5bKn6O )K
bga2{<VF
19. 我觉得右手很疼。 :dzam HbX9
I feel very painful in my right hand. -n~VMLd?@
My right hand is very painful. Or ? My right hand hurts(aches).? 1{S"
axSL
20. 他看到她很惊讶。 K&noA
He looked at her and felt surprised. （fault) }'
t*BaU
He looked at her in surprise Djf,#&j!3
21. 我读过你的小说但是没料到你这么年轻。 o,RLaS,BK'
I have read your novels but I didn't think you could be so young. （fault) lq!l{[ Xp
After having read your novel, I expected that you would be older. ffYiu4$m
22. 她脸红了，让我看穿了她的心思。 Au/n|15->C
Her red face made me see through her mind. （fault) 1%6}m`3
Correct: Her red face told me what she was thinking. CR$5'#11)
23. 看到这幅画让我想到了我的童年时代。 mWM !6"
The sight of these pictures made me remember my own childhood. ZK]C!8\2|
Correct: Seeing these pictures reminded me of my own childhood. Y,@{1X`0@3
24. 别理她。 +P <Lo I
Don't pay attention to her. （fault) +<H)DPG<
Leave her alone. -.E<~(fad
25. 我在大学里学到了许多知识。 hw&R .F
I get a lot of knowledge in the university. （fault) *l^%7W rk
I learned a lot in university. 4<& `\<jZ
26. 黄山正在读书。 qcfLA~y
Samuel is reading a book. （fault) 3J}bI {3
Samuel is reading. up7]Yy;o=
27. exciting / excited。 L1k_AC1.M
28. 我遇到了很多困难。 <[7.+{qfW
I am having many difficulties. （fault) YvK8;<k@-?
I am having a few problems / lots of problems. ?79AB m
a
29. 请快点走，否则我们会迟到的。 Tce2 ]"^;
Please hurry to walk or well be late. （fault) `D%bZ%25 c
Please hurry up or well be late. ""ICdZ_A
30. 她由嫉妒转向失望。 _` zj^*%
She was so jealous that she became desperate. （fault) 6F3#Rxh
Jealousy drove her to despair. 7=8e| $K_
