1. I very like it （Fault） b;m6m4i'f{
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2. 这个价格对我挺合适的。 L?9Vz&8]
The price is very suitable for me. （fault) m> NRIEA6
The price is right. s|,gn 5
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3. 你是做什么工作的呢？ fRrHWE+
What's your job? （fault) VIi| :k
Are you working at the moment? L1rov
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这种说法难道也有毛病吗？是的。因为如果您的谈话对象刚刚失业，如此直接的问法会让对方有失面子，所以您要问：目前您是在上班吗？Are you working at the moment?接下来您才问：目前您在哪儿工作呢？Where are you working these days?或者您从事哪个行业呢？What line of work are you in?顺带说一下，回答这类问题时不妨说得具体一点，不要只是说经理或者秘书 k 92X)/ll'
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4. 用英语怎么说？ 3 <JZt.|
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5. 明天我有事情要做。 <o?qpW$,>
I have something to do tomorrow? （fault) YT: <AJm
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用I have something to do来表示您很忙，这也完全是中国式的说法。因为每时每刻我们都有事情要做，躺在那里睡大觉也是事情。所以您可以说我很忙，脱不开身：I抦 tied up.还有其他的说法：I抦 I can't make it at that time. I'd love to, but I can't, I have to stay at home. C 7+TnJ
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6. 我没有英文名。 ' R=o ,=
I haven't English name. （fault) &I!2gf
I don't have an English name. NoY u"57\
Note：许多人讲英语犯这样的错误，从语法角度来分析，可能是语法功底欠缺，因为have在这里是实义动词，而并不是在现在完成时里面那个没有意义的助动词。所以，这句话由肯定句变成否定句要加助动词。 zo\Xu oZ
明白道理是一回事，习惯是另一回事，请您再说几话：我没有钱；I don't have any money.我没有兄弟姐妹；I don't have any brothers or sisters.我没有车。I don't have a car. ?LNwr[C0
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7. 我想我不行。 4F:RLj9P!
I think I can't.（fault) L</"m[
I don't think I can. gXw\_u e<
Note：这一组然是个习惯问题，在语法上称为否定前置，这就是汉语里面说?我想我不会?的时候，英语里面总是说?我不认为我会?。以后您在说类似的英语句子的时候，只要您留心，也会习惯英语的说法的。 }#E 4t3
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8. 我的舞也跳得不好。 JHO9d:{-
I don't dance well too. （fault) 2d3wQ)2
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Note：当我们说不擅长做什么事情的时候，英语里面通常用not good at something，英语的思维甚至直接踊跃到：我不是一个好的舞者。 9m6 w.:S
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9. 现在几点钟了？ #Wc)wL-Tg
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What time is it, please? 5utj$ha2
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10. 我的英语很糟糕。 v"$; aJ
My English is poor. （fault) &kO4^ A
I am not 100% fluent, but at least I am improving. Xq)'p8C?
Note：有人开玩笑说，全中国人最擅长的一句英文是：My English is poor.实话说，我从来没有遇到一个美国人对我说：My Chinese is poor. 无论他们的汉语是好是坏，他们会说: I am still having a few problem, but I getting better. Nz:
当您告诉外国人，您的英语很poor，so what(那又怎么样呢)，是要让别人当场施舍给我们一些英语呢，还是说我的英语不好，咱们不谈了吧。 mZM5aTQ3
另外一个更大的弊端是，一边不停的学英语，一边不停地说自己的英语很poor,这正像有个人一边给车胎充气，又一边在车胎上扎孔放气。 g| r
我坚信，先不谈别的，如果您现在就苦下功夫，把这本薄薄的《英语54321》吃通吃透，您的英语水平立即就会迅速的提高。所以您再也不用说：我的英语很poor.
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您可以实事求是地说，我的英语还不算十分流利，但至少我在进步。 `DA=';>Y
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11. 你愿意参加我们的晚会吗？ s{iYf :
Would you like to join our party on Friday? （fault) K@>v|JD
Would you like to come to our party on Friday night? <#R7sco'
Note：join往往是指参加俱乐部或者协会，如：join a health club; join the Communist Party.事实上，常常与party搭配的动词的come 或者go。如go a wild party，或者come to a Christmas Party。 +[F9Q,bH@b
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12. 我没有经验。 RNt3az
I have no experience. （fault) " +XO[WGc
I am I don't know much about that. +ubO-A?
Note：I have no experience这句话听起来古里古怪，因为您只需要说：那方面我懂得不多，或者这方面我不在行，就行了。I am not really an expert in this area. 2G'G4 5Q
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13. 我没有男朋友。 ;\&7smE[
I have no boyfriend. （fault) 7 r r5$,Mv
I don't have a boyfriend. ZjI^0D8
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14. 他的身体很健康。 S3oU7*O Z
His body is healthy. （fault) dG)A-qbV
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15. 价钱很昂贵/便宜。 f%|g7[
The price is too expensive/cheap. （fault) GuS3O)6Sg
The price is too high/ rather low. .OWIlT4K
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16. 我们下了车。 94lmsE
We got off the car. L$ ON=$q5
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17. 车速快了。 OVivJx
The speed of the car is fast. bC@ b9opD
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18. 这个春节你回家吗？ H v
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Will you be going back home for the Spring Festival? 6>vj({,1Y*
是的，我回去。Of course! （这一句是错的） 0<Pe~i_ =
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以英语为母语的人使用of course的频率要比中国的学生低得多，只有在回答一些众所周知的问题时才说of course。因为of course后面隐含的一句话是?当然我知道啦！难道我是一个傻瓜吗？?因此，of course带有挑衅的意味。在交谈时，用sure或certainly效果会好得多。同时，of course not也具挑衅的意味。正常情况下语气温和的说法是certainly not. i2!{. *.
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19. 我觉得右手很疼。 K8RloDjk_A
I feel very painful in my right hand. ,Y5+UzE@
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20. 他看到她很惊讶。 O'mX7rY<<(
He looked at her and felt surprised. （fault) lq9c2xK
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21. 我读过你的小说但是没料到你这么年轻。 '%~zu]f'
I have read your novels but I didn't think you could be so young. （fault) 2KzKNe(
After having read your novel, I expected that you would be older. 1R:h$* -z
22. 她脸红了，让我看穿了她的心思。 +22[ h@
Her red face made me see through her mind. （fault) nrxN_0 R%
Correct: Her red face told me what she was thinking. CRx:3u!:
23. 看到这幅画让我想到了我的童年时代。 *J s<VR
The sight of these pictures made me remember my own childhood. 5_i&}c23Vn
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24. 别理她。 }Jtaq[y\r
Don't pay attention to her. （fault) `}=Fw0
Leave her alone. U $J]^-AS
25. 我在大学里学到了许多知识。 |zUDu\MZ{
I get a lot of knowledge in the university. （fault) i &KbzOY
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26. 黄山正在读书。 v
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Samuel is reading a book. （fault) VEpQT
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28. 我遇到了很多困难。 hQ\]vp7V
I am having many difficulties. （fault) /2U.,vw
I am having a few problems / lots of problems. Y{S/A * X
29. 请快点走，否则我们会迟到的。 );*GOLka
Please hurry to walk or well be late. （fault) D0-e,)G}V,
Please hurry up or well be late. < l6CtK@
30. 她由嫉妒转向失望。 .9E`x>C
She was so jealous that she became desperate. （fault) t +#Ss v8
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