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2. 这个价格对我挺合适的。 ] r%fAm j
The price is very suitable for me. （fault) ($8!r|g5#
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3. 你是做什么工作的呢？ eL V [U
What's your job? （fault) r gi4 >
Are you working at the moment? b`J su! ?{
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这种说法难道也有毛病吗？是的。因为如果您的谈话对象刚刚失业，如此直接的问法会让对方有失面子，所以您要问：目前您是在上班吗？Are you working at the moment?接下来您才问：目前您在哪儿工作呢？Where are you working these days?或者您从事哪个行业呢？What line of work are you in?顺带说一下，回答这类问题时不妨说得具体一点，不要只是说经理或者秘书 <(xro/
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4. 用英语怎么说？ '$ z@40u
How to say? （fault) ^&c &5S}
How do you say this in English? 7 9k+R9m
Note：How to say是在中国最为泛滥成灾的中国式英语之一，这决不是地道的英语说法。同样的句子有：请问这个词如何拼写？How do you spell that please?请问这个单词怎么读？How do you pronounce this word? "5Z5x%3I
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5. 明天我有事情要做。 j0n.+CO-{
I have something to do tomorrow? （fault) mtw{7 E
Sorry but I am tied up all day tomorrow. NSR][h_
用I have something to do来表示您很忙，这也完全是中国式的说法。因为每时每刻我们都有事情要做，躺在那里睡大觉也是事情。所以您可以说我很忙，脱不开身：I抦 tied up.还有其他的说法：I抦 I can't make it at that time. I'd love to, but I can't, I have to stay at home. 7 <K=G2_:
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6. 我没有英文名。 l&m Y}k
I haven't English name. （fault) G
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I don't have an English name. Zw<<p|{)<
Note：许多人讲英语犯这样的错误，从语法角度来分析，可能是语法功底欠缺，因为have在这里是实义动词，而并不是在现在完成时里面那个没有意义的助动词。所以，这句话由肯定句变成否定句要加助动词。 6TXTJ]er
明白道理是一回事，习惯是另一回事，请您再说几话：我没有钱；I don't have any money.我没有兄弟姐妹；I don't have any brothers or sisters.我没有车。I don't have a car. )t:8;;W@Ir
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7. 我想我不行。 ta'wX
I think I can't.（fault) 6uk}4bdvq
I don't think I can. m& D#5C
Note：这一组然是个习惯问题，在语法上称为否定前置，这就是汉语里面说?我想我不会?的时候，英语里面总是说?我不认为我会?。以后您在说类似的英语句子的时候，只要您留心，也会习惯英语的说法的。 af u!.}4Ct
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8. 我的舞也跳得不好。 @~&^1%37)
I don't dance well too. （fault) A>RK3{7
I am not a very good dancer either. m6A\R KJ'
Note：当我们说不擅长做什么事情的时候，英语里面通常用not good at something，英语的思维甚至直接踊跃到：我不是一个好的舞者。 k 6i&NG6
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9. 现在几点钟了？ [8Z
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What time is it now? （fault) Ht]O:io`
What time is it, please? 5 v=e(Ph +
Note：What time is it now这是一个直接从汉语翻译过的句子，讲英语的时候没有必要说now,因为您不可能问what time was it yesterday, 或者what time is it tomorrow?所以符合英语习惯的说法是：请问现在几点了？还有一种说法是：How are we doing for time?这句话在有时间限制的时候特别合适 @ Q&k6.{4Z
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10. 我的英语很糟糕。 a 6;5mx
My English is poor. （fault) /xB O;'rR
I am not 100% fluent, but at least I am improving. x`2du/
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Note：有人开玩笑说，全中国人最擅长的一句英文是：My English is poor.实话说，我从来没有遇到一个美国人对我说：My Chinese is poor. 无论他们的汉语是好是坏，他们会说: I am still having a few problem, but I getting better. SDk^fT V8x
当您告诉外国人，您的英语很poor，so what(那又怎么样呢)，是要让别人当场施舍给我们一些英语呢，还是说我的英语不好，咱们不谈了吧。 {M\n
另外一个更大的弊端是，一边不停的学英语，一边不停地说自己的英语很poor,这正像有个人一边给车胎充气，又一边在车胎上扎孔放气。 ;0uiO .
我坚信，先不谈别的，如果您现在就苦下功夫，把这本薄薄的《英语54321》吃通吃透，您的英语水平立即就会迅速的提高。所以您再也不用说：我的英语很poor. 8kE3\#);\
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11. 你愿意参加我们的晚会吗？ T`]P5Bk8r
Would you like to join our party on Friday? （fault) k[f_7lJ2
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12. 我没有经验。 ocZ^rqo2w
I have no experience. （fault) [N<rPHT
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Note：I have no experience这句话听起来古里古怪，因为您只需要说：那方面我懂得不多，或者这方面我不在行，就行了。I am not really an expert in this area. L@ejFXQ g
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13. 我没有男朋友。 >t%@)]*N
I have no boyfriend. （fault) [ A 7{}
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14. 他的身体很健康。 l 3 jlKB
His body is healthy. （fault) ,3!4
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15. 价钱很昂贵/便宜。 aY6F4,7/B
The price is too expensive/cheap. （fault) %7?Z|'\
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16. 我们下了车。 ~mv5{C
We got off the car. N:Ir63X*#
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The speed of the car is fast. WF2t{<]^e
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18. 这个春节你回家吗？ o%0To{MAF-
Will you be going back home for the Spring Festival? iO2jT+i
是的，我回去。Of course! （这一句是错的） wrs r U
当然。Sure. / Certainly.（这种说法是正确的） JC;& ]S.
以英语为母语的人使用of course的频率要比中国的学生低得多，只有在回答一些众所周知的问题时才说of course。因为of course后面隐含的一句话是?当然我知道啦！难道我是一个傻瓜吗？?因此，of course带有挑衅的意味。在交谈时，用sure或certainly效果会好得多。同时，of course not也具挑衅的意味。正常情况下语气温和的说法是certainly not. _~S[
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19. 我觉得右手很疼。 JU)k+ :\a
I feel very painful in my right hand. z*9 ke
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20. 他看到她很惊讶。 s#(%u t
He looked at her and felt surprised. （fault) o7eWL/1
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21. 我读过你的小说但是没料到你这么年轻。 ^MG"n7)X
I have read your novels but I didn't think you could be so young. （fault) SDVnyT
After having read your novel, I expected that you would be older. yM,Y8^
22. 她脸红了，让我看穿了她的心思。 D_`NCnYG
Her red face made me see through her mind. （fault) J"TF@7{p
Correct: Her red face told me what she was thinking. X} g3[
23. 看到这幅画让我想到了我的童年时代。
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The sight of these pictures made me remember my own childhood. w6pXF5ur>
Correct: Seeing these pictures reminded me of my own childhood. ff~1>=^
24. 别理她。 ~qK/w0=j
Don't pay attention to her. （fault) \)ZCB7 |
Leave her alone. }<*KM)%
25. 我在大学里学到了许多知识。 tf[)| /M
I get a lot of knowledge in the university. （fault) 3Vak
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I learned a lot in university. i4XiwjC HN
26. 黄山正在读书。 {faIyKtW
Samuel is reading a book. （fault) M+:9U&>
Samuel is reading. )ybF@emc
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28. 我遇到了很多困难。 z\woTL6D]
I am having many difficulties. （fault) &y(%d 7@/
I am having a few problems / lots of problems. 8DM! ]L
29. 请快点走，否则我们会迟到的。 2 gR*] ?C*
Please hurry to walk or well be late. （fault) 1+YqdDqQ
Please hurry up or well be late. P+QL||>L
30. 她由嫉妒转向失望。 syI|gANT/r
She was so jealous that she became desperate. （fault) 'g3T'2"`5
Jealousy drove her to despair. +(^H L3
