1. I very like it （Fault） Uy$)%dYfq5
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2. 这个价格对我挺合适的。 IEza K
The price is very suitable for me. （fault) ]Ei0d8U o
The price is right. @U2qD
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3. 你是做什么工作的呢？ DrO2 y
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Are you working at the moment? /IM# .v
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这种说法难道也有毛病吗？是的。因为如果您的谈话对象刚刚失业，如此直接的问法会让对方有失面子，所以您要问：目前您是在上班吗？Are you working at the moment?接下来您才问：目前您在哪儿工作呢？Where are you working these days?或者您从事哪个行业呢？What line of work are you in?顺带说一下，回答这类问题时不妨说得具体一点，不要只是说经理或者秘书 )'4k|@ 8|
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4. 用英语怎么说？ z5r$M
How to say? （fault) TqddOp
How do you say this in English? IzpZwx^3''
Note：How to say是在中国最为泛滥成灾的中国式英语之一，这决不是地道的英语说法。同样的句子有：请问这个词如何拼写？How do you spell that please?请问这个单词怎么读？How do you pronounce this word? 8A+SjJ4$
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5. 明天我有事情要做。 ?'<nx{!c
I have something to do tomorrow? （fault) `YI f_a{
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用I have something to do来表示您很忙，这也完全是中国式的说法。因为每时每刻我们都有事情要做，躺在那里睡大觉也是事情。所以您可以说我很忙，脱不开身：I抦 tied up.还有其他的说法：I抦 I can't make it at that time. I'd love to, but I can't, I have to stay at home. .;*s`t
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6. 我没有英文名。 wy}k1E'M
I haven't English name. （fault) >`%'4<I
I don't have an English name. J; f!!<l \
Note：许多人讲英语犯这样的错误，从语法角度来分析，可能是语法功底欠缺，因为have在这里是实义动词，而并不是在现在完成时里面那个没有意义的助动词。所以，这句话由肯定句变成否定句要加助动词。 ,Bal
明白道理是一回事，习惯是另一回事，请您再说几话：我没有钱；I don't have any money.我没有兄弟姐妹；I don't have any brothers or sisters.我没有车。I don't have a car. 3fh8$A
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7. 我想我不行。 yn/rW$
I think I can't.（fault) %,k] [V
I don't think I can. XGkkB
Note：这一组然是个习惯问题，在语法上称为否定前置，这就是汉语里面说?我想我不会?的时候，英语里面总是说?我不认为我会?。以后您在说类似的英语句子的时候，只要您留心，也会习惯英语的说法的。 cwL1/DGDB
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8. 我的舞也跳得不好。 %C=]1Q=T)
I don't dance well too. （fault) |e2be1LD
I am not a very good dancer either. }eRD|1
Note：当我们说不擅长做什么事情的时候，英语里面通常用not good at something，英语的思维甚至直接踊跃到：我不是一个好的舞者。 WuZ/C_
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9. 现在几点钟了？ :"!9_p(,,
What time is it now? （fault) r!{LLc}>
What time is it, please? hc'-Dh
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10. 我的英语很糟糕。 :G<E^<M\)^
My English is poor. （fault) !1G ."fo
I am not 100% fluent, but at least I am improving. S!sqbLrBn
Note：有人开玩笑说，全中国人最擅长的一句英文是：My English is poor.实话说，我从来没有遇到一个美国人对我说：My Chinese is poor. 无论他们的汉语是好是坏，他们会说: I am still having a few problem, but I getting better. W< E47
当您告诉外国人，您的英语很poor，so what(那又怎么样呢)，是要让别人当场施舍给我们一些英语呢，还是说我的英语不好，咱们不谈了吧。 h @LHR MO
另外一个更大的弊端是，一边不停的学英语，一边不停地说自己的英语很poor,这正像有个人一边给车胎充气，又一边在车胎上扎孔放气。 q| LDo~H
我坚信，先不谈别的，如果您现在就苦下功夫，把这本薄薄的《英语54321》吃通吃透，您的英语水平立即就会迅速的提高。所以您再也不用说：我的英语很poor. Co3:*nbRv
您可以实事求是地说，我的英语还不算十分流利，但至少我在进步。 17OH]
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11. 你愿意参加我们的晚会吗？ }ga@ />Sl&
Would you like to join our party on Friday? （fault) ,-O Cc!7K
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Note：join往往是指参加俱乐部或者协会，如：join a health club; join the Communist Party.事实上，常常与party搭配的动词的come 或者go。如go a wild party，或者come to a Christmas Party。 ]Qe{e3p;
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12. 我没有经验。 w-0mzk"
I have no experience. （fault) $]rj73p^tH
I am I don't know much about that. {pHM}, WJ
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13. 我没有男朋友。 6}KZp~s
I have no boyfriend. （fault) '`Wwt.A
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14. 他的身体很健康。 u SR~@Lj ~
His body is healthy. （fault) No J`6MB
He is in good health. You can also say: He抯 healthy. 5T: i9h
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15. 价钱很昂贵/便宜。 Q(\4]i< S
The price is too expensive/cheap. （fault) I Ecf
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16. 我们下了车。 uZ=NSbYsA
We got off the car. H/"lAXfb
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17. 车速快了。 kn/Ao}J74z
The speed of the car is fast. ~wVd$%7`
The car is speeding. Or 揟he car is going too fast.? 9,^_ <O@Q
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18. 这个春节你回家吗？ MX ;J5(Ae
Will you be going back home for the Spring Festival? \~5C7^_
是的，我回去。Of course! （这一句是错的） S*sT] J`!
当然。Sure. / Certainly.（这种说法是正确的） !Lh^oPT"I
以英语为母语的人使用of course的频率要比中国的学生低得多，只有在回答一些众所周知的问题时才说of course。因为of course后面隐含的一句话是?当然我知道啦！难道我是一个傻瓜吗？?因此，of course带有挑衅的意味。在交谈时，用sure或certainly效果会好得多。同时，of course not也具挑衅的意味。正常情况下语气温和的说法是certainly not. DzheoA-+L'
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19. 我觉得右手很疼。 ]7rj/l$ u
I feel very painful in my right hand. V3ndV-uQE
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20. 他看到她很惊讶。 ]7Z{ 8)T
He looked at her and felt surprised. （fault) H`geS
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21. 我读过你的小说但是没料到你这么年轻。 W
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I have read your novels but I didn't think you could be so young. （fault) %.z,+Zz?
After having read your novel, I expected that you would be older. - > J_ ~
22. 她脸红了，让我看穿了她的心思。 &EpAg@9!
Her red face made me see through her mind. （fault) {N#KkYH{"
Correct: Her red face told me what she was thinking. DSj(]U~r
23. 看到这幅画让我想到了我的童年时代。 UYz0PSV=.
The sight of these pictures made me remember my own childhood. i>joT><B
Correct: Seeing these pictures reminded me of my own childhood. z-c}NdW
24. 别理她。 Wn>@9"
Don't pay attention to her. （fault) M G?0>^F
Leave her alone. }E7:ihy
25. 我在大学里学到了许多知识。 .m`y><.5
I get a lot of knowledge in the university. （fault) kMsnW}Nu
I learned a lot in university. G!XIc>F*
26. 黄山正在读书。 2m~V{mUT!
Samuel is reading a book. （fault) XJ Iv1s\g
Samuel is reading.
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28. 我遇到了很多困难。 @l0|*lo%
I am having many difficulties. （fault) .T*GN|@$!
I am having a few problems / lots of problems. 5 IbJ
29. 请快点走，否则我们会迟到的。 UQ.7>Ug+8s
Please hurry to walk or well be late. （fault) ZlojbL@|4
Please hurry up or well be late. Z'k|u4ZC
30. 她由嫉妒转向失望。 5 H9r=a
She was so jealous that she became desperate. （fault) d|iy#hy"_
Jealousy drove her to despair. Q*XE
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