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2. 这个价格对我挺合适的。 qs]7S^yw
The price is very suitable for me. （fault) $`&u u
The price is right. }.UE< >OX
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3. 你是做什么工作的呢？ AW+ q# Is
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Are you working at the moment? aT %A<'O!
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4. 用英语怎么说？ z5G$ '
How to say? （fault) clZ jb
How do you say this in English? q!
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5. 明天我有事情要做。 ^sNj[%I
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Sorry but I am tied up all day tomorrow. j<LDJi>O
用I have something to do来表示您很忙，这也完全是中国式的说法。因为每时每刻我们都有事情要做，躺在那里睡大觉也是事情。所以您可以说我很忙，脱不开身：I抦 tied up.还有其他的说法：I抦 I can't make it at that time. I'd love to, but I can't, I have to stay at home. |\OG9{q
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6. 我没有英文名。 BQ ol>VRu
I haven't English name. （fault) t6u01r{~`
I don't have an English name. xCOC5f5*@
Note：许多人讲英语犯这样的错误，从语法角度来分析，可能是语法功底欠缺，因为have在这里是实义动词，而并不是在现在完成时里面那个没有意义的助动词。所以，这句话由肯定句变成否定句要加助动词。 CR-6}T
明白道理是一回事，习惯是另一回事，请您再说几话：我没有钱；I don't have any money.我没有兄弟姐妹；I don't have any brothers or sisters.我没有车。I don't have a car. QJaF6>m
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7. 我想我不行。 >~kSe=Hsb4
I think I can't.（fault) dX0"h5v1
I don't think I can. X=<-rFW
Note：这一组然是个习惯问题，在语法上称为否定前置，这就是汉语里面说?我想我不会?的时候，英语里面总是说?我不认为我会?。以后您在说类似的英语句子的时候，只要您留心，也会习惯英语的说法的。 :-= ,([TJ
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8. 我的舞也跳得不好。 zd+_
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I don't dance well too. （fault) ;MqH)M
I am not a very good dancer either. cj:!uhZp7
Note：当我们说不擅长做什么事情的时候，英语里面通常用not good at something，英语的思维甚至直接踊跃到：我不是一个好的舞者。 Ed%8| M3
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9. 现在几点钟了？ RfMrGC^?
What time is it now? （fault) (P-Bmu!s
What time is it, please? {:VUu?5-t;
Note：What time is it now这是一个直接从汉语翻译过的句子，讲英语的时候没有必要说now,因为您不可能问what time was it yesterday, 或者what time is it tomorrow?所以符合英语习惯的说法是：请问现在几点了？还有一种说法是：How are we doing for time?这句话在有时间限制的时候特别合适 szY=N7\S*
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10. 我的英语很糟糕。 | d* K'+
My English is poor. （fault) '= _}&
I am not 100% fluent, but at least I am improving. ]Y'oxh
Note：有人开玩笑说，全中国人最擅长的一句英文是：My English is poor.实话说，我从来没有遇到一个美国人对我说：My Chinese is poor. 无论他们的汉语是好是坏，他们会说: I am still having a few problem, but I getting better. |uT&`0T'e`
当您告诉外国人，您的英语很poor，so what(那又怎么样呢)，是要让别人当场施舍给我们一些英语呢，还是说我的英语不好，咱们不谈了吧。 Kzw )Q
另外一个更大的弊端是，一边不停的学英语，一边不停地说自己的英语很poor,这正像有个人一边给车胎充气，又一边在车胎上扎孔放气。 H
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我坚信，先不谈别的，如果您现在就苦下功夫，把这本薄薄的《英语54321》吃通吃透，您的英语水平立即就会迅速的提高。所以您再也不用说：我的英语很poor. F] hKi`@
您可以实事求是地说，我的英语还不算十分流利，但至少我在进步。 s :j "8ZH
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11. 你愿意参加我们的晚会吗？ $ePBw~yu
Would you like to join our party on Friday? （fault) I$o ^F/RH
Would you like to come to our party on Friday night? *;~*S4/P
Note：join往往是指参加俱乐部或者协会，如：join a health club; join the Communist Party.事实上，常常与party搭配的动词的come 或者go。如go a wild party，或者come to a Christmas Party。 / ; U
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12. 我没有经验。 @?A 39G{
I have no experience. （fault) w !N; Y0
I am I don't know much about that. GT[,[l
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13. 我没有男朋友。 F F"6~
I have no boyfriend. （fault) . mDh9V5
I don't have a boyfriend. qHGXs@*M&
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14. 他的身体很健康。 paUlp7x
His body is healthy. （fault) tdTD!'
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15. 价钱很昂贵/便宜。 LLn,pI2fL{
The price is too expensive/cheap. （fault) $'I+] ;
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16. 我们下了车。 2 0Xqs,
We got off the car. h*_h M1 *;
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17. 车速快了。 :/N/u5 .]
The speed of the car is fast. &C eG4_Mi
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18. 这个春节你回家吗？ *t{$GBP
Will you be going back home for the Spring Festival? !c`K zqP
是的，我回去。Of course! （这一句是错的） x/NR_~Rnk
当然。Sure. / Certainly.（这种说法是正确的） qRg^Bp'VD#
以英语为母语的人使用of course的频率要比中国的学生低得多，只有在回答一些众所周知的问题时才说of course。因为of course后面隐含的一句话是?当然我知道啦！难道我是一个傻瓜吗？?因此，of course带有挑衅的意味。在交谈时，用sure或certainly效果会好得多。同时，of course not也具挑衅的意味。正常情况下语气温和的说法是certainly not. <_HK@E<_HO
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19. 我觉得右手很疼。 pu(a&0
I feel very painful in my right hand. 03ol!|X "9
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20. 他看到她很惊讶。 y ub|
He looked at her and felt surprised. （fault) D|W^PR:@h
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21. 我读过你的小说但是没料到你这么年轻。 $2uZdl8Rvj
I have read your novels but I didn't think you could be so young. （fault)
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After having read your novel, I expected that you would be older. "HRoS#| \
22. 她脸红了，让我看穿了她的心思。 )$#]h]ac
Her red face made me see through her mind. （fault) OW (45
Correct: Her red face told me what she was thinking. Ih* }1D)7
23. 看到这幅画让我想到了我的童年时代。 8Wn;U!qT
The sight of these pictures made me remember my own childhood. wN [m U
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24. 别理她。 -2}-;|
Don't pay attention to her. （fault) '-s Ai
Leave her alone. En:.U9?X
25. 我在大学里学到了许多知识。 gC81ICM
I get a lot of knowledge in the university. （fault) \ltA &}!
I learned a lot in university. [|gh q
26. 黄山正在读书。 -@49Zh2'
Samuel is reading a book. （fault) D-8N Da(`
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27. exciting / excited。 5"4O_JQ
28. 我遇到了很多困难。
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I am having many difficulties. （fault) bT|N Z!V
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29. 请快点走，否则我们会迟到的。 j9 zK=eG
Please hurry to walk or well be late. （fault) ]UG+<V
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30. 她由嫉妒转向失望。 74VN3m
She was so jealous that she became desperate. （fault) 3[kY:5-
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