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I like it very much. (true) ?# )\SQ
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2. 这个价格对我挺合适的。 tdnd~ WSR
The price is very suitable for me. （fault) {Ty ?OZ
The price is right. 3s Mmg`
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3. 你是做什么工作的呢？ saR9_
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这种说法难道也有毛病吗？是的。因为如果您的谈话对象刚刚失业，如此直接的问法会让对方有失面子，所以您要问：目前您是在上班吗？Are you working at the moment?接下来您才问：目前您在哪儿工作呢？Where are you working these days?或者您从事哪个行业呢？What line of work are you in?顺带说一下，回答这类问题时不妨说得具体一点，不要只是说经理或者秘书
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4. 用英语怎么说？ xd]7?L@h.I
How to say? （fault) _ Z z ne
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5. 明天我有事情要做。 {D4N=#tl
I have something to do tomorrow? （fault) /
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用I have something to do来表示您很忙，这也完全是中国式的说法。因为每时每刻我们都有事情要做，躺在那里睡大觉也是事情。所以您可以说我很忙，脱不开身：I抦 tied up.还有其他的说法：I抦 I can't make it at that time. I'd love to, but I can't, I have to stay at home. ux>L ciN q
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6. 我没有英文名。 qQCds}<w
I haven't English name. （fault) Z/b,aZhB
I don't have an English name. 2G }@s. iE
Note：许多人讲英语犯这样的错误，从语法角度来分析，可能是语法功底欠缺，因为have在这里是实义动词，而并不是在现在完成时里面那个没有意义的助动词。所以，这句话由肯定句变成否定句要加助动词。 ?,FL"ye
明白道理是一回事，习惯是另一回事，请您再说几话：我没有钱；I don't have any money.我没有兄弟姐妹；I don't have any brothers or sisters.我没有车。I don't have a car. }Z% j=c"d
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7. 我想我不行。 AI3\eH+
I think I can't.（fault) {)& b6}2h
I don't think I can. avxI%% |
Note：这一组然是个习惯问题，在语法上称为否定前置，这就是汉语里面说?我想我不会?的时候，英语里面总是说?我不认为我会?。以后您在说类似的英语句子的时候，只要您留心，也会习惯英语的说法的。 QykHB
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8. 我的舞也跳得不好。 g
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I don't dance well too. （fault) 0ZtH
I am not a very good dancer either. 5!7vD |6
Note：当我们说不擅长做什么事情的时候，英语里面通常用not good at something，英语的思维甚至直接踊跃到：我不是一个好的舞者。 }xytV5a^
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9. 现在几点钟了？ ?) FY7[x .
What time is it now? （fault) LH>h]OTQF
What time is it, please? \-I)dMm[
Note：What time is it now这是一个直接从汉语翻译过的句子，讲英语的时候没有必要说now,因为您不可能问what time was it yesterday, 或者what time is it tomorrow?所以符合英语习惯的说法是：请问现在几点了？还有一种说法是：How are we doing for time?这句话在有时间限制的时候特别合适 ;;n=(cM|z
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10. 我的英语很糟糕。 }r:8w*4 7
My English is poor. （fault) ~D! Y]
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I am not 100% fluent, but at least I am improving. 8iN@n8O
Note：有人开玩笑说，全中国人最擅长的一句英文是：My English is poor.实话说，我从来没有遇到一个美国人对我说：My Chinese is poor. 无论他们的汉语是好是坏，他们会说: I am still having a few problem, but I getting better. ,pVq / 1
当您告诉外国人，您的英语很poor，so what(那又怎么样呢)，是要让别人当场施舍给我们一些英语呢，还是说我的英语不好，咱们不谈了吧。 {fu[&@XV
另外一个更大的弊端是，一边不停的学英语，一边不停地说自己的英语很poor,这正像有个人一边给车胎充气，又一边在车胎上扎孔放气。 ufS0UD8%H
我坚信，先不谈别的，如果您现在就苦下功夫，把这本薄薄的《英语54321》吃通吃透，您的英语水平立即就会迅速的提高。所以您再也不用说：我的英语很poor. hPrE
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11. 你愿意参加我们的晚会吗？ eHH9#Vrhc$
Would you like to join our party on Friday? （fault) [N1[khY`
Would you like to come to our party on Friday night? UQCon d+K
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12. 我没有经验。 +( vL ~
I have no experience. （fault) [ jgC`
I am I don't know much about that. v QDkZ
Note：I have no experience这句话听起来古里古怪，因为您只需要说：那方面我懂得不多，或者这方面我不在行，就行了。I am not really an expert in this area. u 9%AK g}~
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13. 我没有男朋友。 ;($ 3,d8
I have no boyfriend. （fault) ]8EkZC
I don't have a boyfriend. BaE}|4
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14. 他的身体很健康。 dsA::jR0P6
His body is healthy. （fault) <F+9#-
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15. 价钱很昂贵/便宜。 \h7XdmA]~
The price is too expensive/cheap. （fault) O] \eMM&
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16. 我们下了车。 xwu,<M
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17. 车速快了。 p0j-$*F
The speed of the car is fast. dF0 :'y
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18. 这个春节你回家吗？ f{f|frs
Will you be going back home for the Spring Festival? cUZ^,) 8
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当然。Sure. / Certainly.（这种说法是正确的） 1A/li%
以英语为母语的人使用of course的频率要比中国的学生低得多，只有在回答一些众所周知的问题时才说of course。因为of course后面隐含的一句话是?当然我知道啦！难道我是一个傻瓜吗？?因此，of course带有挑衅的意味。在交谈时，用sure或certainly效果会好得多。同时，of course not也具挑衅的意味。正常情况下语气温和的说法是certainly not.
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19. 我觉得右手很疼。 Xc7Qu?}
I feel very painful in my right hand. p|R]/C0f
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20. 他看到她很惊讶。 !8Q9RnGn
He looked at her and felt surprised. （fault) (1?k _!)T
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21. 我读过你的小说但是没料到你这么年轻。 p?eQN
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I have read your novels but I didn't think you could be so young. （fault) HZzdelo
After having read your novel, I expected that you would be older. C**kJ
22. 她脸红了，让我看穿了她的心思。 J|[`8 *8
Her red face made me see through her mind. （fault) Ov8{ny
Correct: Her red face told me what she was thinking. px.]m-
23. 看到这幅画让我想到了我的童年时代。 ' $X}' u
The sight of these pictures made me remember my own childhood. @)m+b;
Correct: Seeing these pictures reminded me of my own childhood. Q-Rt
24. 别理她。 HH,G3~EBF
Don't pay attention to her. （fault) p4I6oS`/.
Leave her alone. ~CL^% \K
25. 我在大学里学到了许多知识。 ;g v9J [R
I get a lot of knowledge in the university. （fault) t&Z:G<;
I learned a lot in university. qf6}\0
26. 黄山正在读书。 SZ"^>}zl=
Samuel is reading a book. （fault) Q5qQ%cu
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28. 我遇到了很多困难。 XW9
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I am having many difficulties. （fault) y5 bELWA
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29. 请快点走，否则我们会迟到的。 $)Pmr1==
Please hurry to walk or well be late. （fault) *`.4M)Ym~
Please hurry up or well be late. LjA>H>8%[
30. 她由嫉妒转向失望。 h; sdm/
She was so jealous that she became desperate. （fault) pM'AhzS
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