1. I very like it （Fault） Og^b'Kx/
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2. 这个价格对我挺合适的。 G !wFG-Y}
The price is very suitable for me. （fault) kvKbl;< &#
The price is right. XO219
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3. 你是做什么工作的呢？ 8M !If
What's your job? （fault) I oj F/
Are you working at the moment? (oxe'\
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这种说法难道也有毛病吗？是的。因为如果您的谈话对象刚刚失业，如此直接的问法会让对方有失面子，所以您要问：目前您是在上班吗？Are you working at the moment?接下来您才问：目前您在哪儿工作呢？Where are you working these days?或者您从事哪个行业呢？What line of work are you in?顺带说一下，回答这类问题时不妨说得具体一点，不要只是说经理或者秘书 *GD?d2.6j
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4. 用英语怎么说？ qauk,t
How to say? （fault) h9$Ov`N(%
How do you say this in English? 6_rS !X
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5. 明天我有事情要做。 Xb.WI\Eh
I have something to do tomorrow? （fault) "'~55bG
Sorry but I am tied up all day tomorrow. *+rO3% ;t
用I have something to do来表示您很忙，这也完全是中国式的说法。因为每时每刻我们都有事情要做，躺在那里睡大觉也是事情。所以您可以说我很忙，脱不开身：I抦 tied up.还有其他的说法：I抦 I can't make it at that time. I'd love to, but I can't, I have to stay at home. 1ti+
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6. 我没有英文名。 R$sG*=a!8j
I haven't English name. （fault) 09HlL=0q
I don't have an English name. ?%(:
Note：许多人讲英语犯这样的错误，从语法角度来分析，可能是语法功底欠缺，因为have在这里是实义动词，而并不是在现在完成时里面那个没有意义的助动词。所以，这句话由肯定句变成否定句要加助动词。 -YPUrU[)
明白道理是一回事，习惯是另一回事，请您再说几话：我没有钱；I don't have any money.我没有兄弟姐妹；I don't have any brothers or sisters.我没有车。I don't have a car. rzsAnLxo
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7. 我想我不行。 5R"iF+p4
I think I can't.（fault) \("|X>00
I don't think I can. Y|stxeOC
Note：这一组然是个习惯问题，在语法上称为否定前置，这就是汉语里面说?我想我不会?的时候，英语里面总是说?我不认为我会?。以后您在说类似的英语句子的时候，只要您留心，也会习惯英语的说法的。 %a$ l%8j&
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8. 我的舞也跳得不好。 +`'=K ;{U
I don't dance well too. （fault) [+j }:u
I am not a very good dancer either. > PH in%#
Note：当我们说不擅长做什么事情的时候，英语里面通常用not good at something，英语的思维甚至直接踊跃到：我不是一个好的舞者。 C+tB$yahO
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9. 现在几点钟了？ 41dB4Td5t
What time is it now? （fault) 1g<jr.
What time is it, please? J$"3w,O6+U
Note：What time is it now这是一个直接从汉语翻译过的句子，讲英语的时候没有必要说now,因为您不可能问what time was it yesterday, 或者what time is it tomorrow?所以符合英语习惯的说法是：请问现在几点了？还有一种说法是：How are we doing for time?这句话在有时间限制的时候特别合适 6N+ ]g/_a
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10. 我的英语很糟糕。 Pr| B hX
My English is poor. （fault) s
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I am not 100% fluent, but at least I am improving. {^(h*zxn
Note：有人开玩笑说，全中国人最擅长的一句英文是：My English is poor.实话说，我从来没有遇到一个美国人对我说：My Chinese is poor. 无论他们的汉语是好是坏，他们会说: I am still having a few problem, but I getting better. >JVd L\3
当您告诉外国人，您的英语很poor，so what(那又怎么样呢)，是要让别人当场施舍给我们一些英语呢，还是说我的英语不好，咱们不谈了吧。 j AXKp
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另外一个更大的弊端是，一边不停的学英语，一边不停地说自己的英语很poor,这正像有个人一边给车胎充气，又一边在车胎上扎孔放气。 } Y9= 3X
我坚信，先不谈别的，如果您现在就苦下功夫，把这本薄薄的《英语54321》吃通吃透，您的英语水平立即就会迅速的提高。所以您再也不用说：我的英语很poor. 9eR4?^(3!
您可以实事求是地说，我的英语还不算十分流利，但至少我在进步。 Wl?0|{W
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11. 你愿意参加我们的晚会吗？ bSJ@
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Would you like to join our party on Friday? （fault) b} <?& @
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Note：join往往是指参加俱乐部或者协会，如：join a health club; join the Communist Party.事实上，常常与party搭配的动词的come 或者go。如go a wild party，或者come to a Christmas Party。 9fQ[:Hl"
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12. 我没有经验。 h[*:\P `
I have no experience. （fault) r&rip^40
I am I don't know much about that. L*(Sh2=_
Note：I have no experience这句话听起来古里古怪，因为您只需要说：那方面我懂得不多，或者这方面我不在行，就行了。I am not really an expert in this area. CqFk(Td9-D
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13. 我没有男朋友。 \Dlmrke
I have no boyfriend. （fault) ){}1u ?
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14. 他的身体很健康。 4(nwi[1Y
His body is healthy. （fault) \0fS;Q^{j
He is in good health. You can also say: He抯 healthy. +Hd'*'c
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15. 价钱很昂贵/便宜。 Gg TrIF
The price is too expensive/cheap. （fault) u; G-46
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16. 我们下了车。 *G&3NSM-
We got off the car. [6cF#_)*
We got out of the car. *e,GXU@
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17. 车速快了。 %LjhK,'h
The speed of the car is fast. iy-~CPNB_
The car is speeding. Or 揟he car is going too fast.? +bdjZD3
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18. 这个春节你回家吗？ 1| XC $0
Will you be going back home for the Spring Festival? AFdBf6/" i
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以英语为母语的人使用of course的频率要比中国的学生低得多，只有在回答一些众所周知的问题时才说of course。因为of course后面隐含的一句话是?当然我知道啦！难道我是一个傻瓜吗？?因此，of course带有挑衅的意味。在交谈时，用sure或certainly效果会好得多。同时，of course not也具挑衅的意味。正常情况下语气温和的说法是certainly not. M$Or|HTG
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19. 我觉得右手很疼。 ] @A31P4t|
I feel very painful in my right hand. 3)*Twqt
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20. 他看到她很惊讶。 v|IG
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He looked at her and felt surprised. （fault) 9s2 N!bx
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21. 我读过你的小说但是没料到你这么年轻。 N$! Vm(S
I have read your novels but I didn't think you could be so young. （fault) M
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After having read your novel, I expected that you would be older. \O=t5yS
22. 她脸红了，让我看穿了她的心思。 (5h+b_eB
Her red face made me see through her mind. （fault) ? t_$C,A+
Correct: Her red face told me what she was thinking. rUDMQxLruV
23. 看到这幅画让我想到了我的童年时代。 1kczlTF
The sight of these pictures made me remember my own childhood. 3?r?)$Jk
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24. 别理她。 J_7&nI H7
Don't pay attention to her. （fault) chszP{-@X
Leave her alone. d9 pZg=$8
25. 我在大学里学到了许多知识。 k:DAko}
I get a lot of knowledge in the university. （fault) v%8S:3
I learned a lot in university. {GhM,-%e
26. 黄山正在读书。 \9%RY]T K3
Samuel is reading a book. （fault) IRK(y*6
Samuel is reading. ^"{txd?6
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28. 我遇到了很多困难。 !8}x6
I am having many difficulties. （fault) !9g >/9h
I am having a few problems / lots of problems. [` U9
29. 请快点走，否则我们会迟到的。 WmTg`[
Please hurry to walk or well be late. （fault) Ja%(kq[v
Please hurry up or well be late. 't#E-+o
30. 她由嫉妒转向失望。 " !z9U iA
She was so jealous that she became desperate. （fault) eG08Xt |lc
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