1. I very like it （Fault） H;ib3?
I like it very much. (true) 2T5ZbXc+x
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2. 这个价格对我挺合适的。 Cv33?l-8%_
The price is very suitable for me. （fault) $_kU)<e3
The price is right. 4+"SG@i`W
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3. 你是做什么工作的呢？ gX<C-y6o
What's your job? （fault) C? S %fF
Are you working at the moment? *1Q?~
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这种说法难道也有毛病吗？是的。因为如果您的谈话对象刚刚失业，如此直接的问法会让对方有失面子，所以您要问：目前您是在上班吗？Are you working at the moment?接下来您才问：目前您在哪儿工作呢？Where are you working these days?或者您从事哪个行业呢？What line of work are you in?顺带说一下，回答这类问题时不妨说得具体一点，不要只是说经理或者秘书 9:s!#FYFM
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4. 用英语怎么说？ db|$7 ]!w
How to say? （fault) AaVlNjB
How do you say this in English? M-hnBt
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5. 明天我有事情要做。 00+5 a
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I have something to do tomorrow? （fault) F_`Gs8- VH
Sorry but I am tied up all day tomorrow. iDr0_y*t
用I have something to do来表示您很忙，这也完全是中国式的说法。因为每时每刻我们都有事情要做，躺在那里睡大觉也是事情。所以您可以说我很忙，脱不开身：I抦 tied up.还有其他的说法：I抦 I can't make it at that time. I'd love to, but I can't, I have to stay at home. we3t,?`rk7
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6. 我没有英文名。 Lq.k?!D3uh
I haven't English name. （fault) pm+[,u!i
I don't have an English name. 3 ( kZfH~
Note：许多人讲英语犯这样的错误，从语法角度来分析，可能是语法功底欠缺，因为have在这里是实义动词，而并不是在现在完成时里面那个没有意义的助动词。所以，这句话由肯定句变成否定句要加助动词。 fmh]Y/UC
明白道理是一回事，习惯是另一回事，请您再说几话：我没有钱；I don't have any money.我没有兄弟姐妹；I don't have any brothers or sisters.我没有车。I don't have a car. `'`XB0vb
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7. 我想我不行。 zF 7T5 Ge
I think I can't.（fault) b._pG (o1
I don't think I can. e6Y0G,K
Note：这一组然是个习惯问题，在语法上称为否定前置，这就是汉语里面说?我想我不会?的时候，英语里面总是说?我不认为我会?。以后您在说类似的英语句子的时候，只要您留心，也会习惯英语的说法的。 ]h6 <o*
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8. 我的舞也跳得不好。 ND*5pRzvp
I don't dance well too. （fault) %0QYkHdFR`
I am not a very good dancer either. I V76#jL
Note：当我们说不擅长做什么事情的时候，英语里面通常用not good at something，英语的思维甚至直接踊跃到：我不是一个好的舞者。 2cL< `
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9. 现在几点钟了？ +FI]0r
What time is it now? （fault) $v,_8{ !
What time is it, please? (#~063N,#
Note：What time is it now这是一个直接从汉语翻译过的句子，讲英语的时候没有必要说now,因为您不可能问what time was it yesterday, 或者what time is it tomorrow?所以符合英语习惯的说法是：请问现在几点了？还有一种说法是：How are we doing for time?这句话在有时间限制的时候特别合适 +}]xuYzo
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10. 我的英语很糟糕。 GmFNL/x8-v
My English is poor. （fault) h1$,
I am not 100% fluent, but at least I am improving. pB`<4+"9
Note：有人开玩笑说，全中国人最擅长的一句英文是：My English is poor.实话说，我从来没有遇到一个美国人对我说：My Chinese is poor. 无论他们的汉语是好是坏，他们会说: I am still having a few problem, but I getting better. o'G")o
当您告诉外国人，您的英语很poor，so what(那又怎么样呢)，是要让别人当场施舍给我们一些英语呢，还是说我的英语不好，咱们不谈了吧。 u56cT/J 1
另外一个更大的弊端是，一边不停的学英语，一边不停地说自己的英语很poor,这正像有个人一边给车胎充气，又一边在车胎上扎孔放气。 c{[WOrA~#
我坚信，先不谈别的，如果您现在就苦下功夫，把这本薄薄的《英语54321》吃通吃透，您的英语水平立即就会迅速的提高。所以您再也不用说：我的英语很poor. H`sV\'`!}
您可以实事求是地说，我的英语还不算十分流利，但至少我在进步。 TD'1L:mv
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11. 你愿意参加我们的晚会吗？ ?]S* = 6
Would you like to join our party on Friday? （fault) MFrVGEQBRL
Would you like to come to our party on Friday night? L,$9)`j
Note：join往往是指参加俱乐部或者协会，如：join a health club; join the Communist Party.事实上，常常与party搭配的动词的come 或者go。如go a wild party，或者come to a Christmas Party。 4?`7XJ0a
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12. 我没有经验。 _F3 :j9^
I have no experience. （fault) [||$1u\%
I am I don't know much about that. raCxHY
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13. 我没有男朋友。 5K0Isuu>>
I have no boyfriend. （fault) _
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I don't have a boyfriend. U:H*b{`TU
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14. 他的身体很健康。 ~O!v?2it8q
His body is healthy. （fault) 0[^f9NZ>-
He is in good health. You can also say: He抯 healthy. YC{od5a
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15. 价钱很昂贵/便宜。 2]|+.9B
The price is too expensive/cheap. （fault) &12.|
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16. 我们下了车。 5 Jd,]~KAP
We got off the car. yo5|~"yZY
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17. 车速快了。 RaR$lcG+iY
The speed of the car is fast. cOc m9m#
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18. 这个春节你回家吗？ 7+fFKZFKF
Will you be going back home for the Spring Festival? i9Qx {f88
是的，我回去。Of course! （这一句是错的） 3/iGSG`
当然。Sure. / Certainly.（这种说法是正确的） U.&=b<f(0r
以英语为母语的人使用of course的频率要比中国的学生低得多，只有在回答一些众所周知的问题时才说of course。因为of course后面隐含的一句话是?当然我知道啦！难道我是一个傻瓜吗？?因此，of course带有挑衅的意味。在交谈时，用sure或certainly效果会好得多。同时，of course not也具挑衅的意味。正常情况下语气温和的说法是certainly not. ,Ao8QN
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19. 我觉得右手很疼。 v q|W&
I feel very painful in my right hand. )l^w _;
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20. 他看到她很惊讶。 \%UA6uj
He looked at her and felt surprised. （fault) JHcC}+H[
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21. 我读过你的小说但是没料到你这么年轻。 o`G@Je_}x
I have read your novels but I didn't think you could be so young. （fault) *x$\5;A
After having read your novel, I expected that you would be older. rQU;?[y
22. 她脸红了，让我看穿了她的心思。 WlU5`NJl]2
Her red face made me see through her mind. （fault) n<MH\.!tM
Correct: Her red face told me what she was thinking. Xr-eDU Ei
23. 看到这幅画让我想到了我的童年时代。 *+5AN30 6
The sight of these pictures made me remember my own childhood. y 2bZo'Z
Correct: Seeing these pictures reminded me of my own childhood. YDP<
24. 别理她。 D+tn<\LF
Don't pay attention to her. （fault) 6:Ra3!V"v
Leave her alone. @X:P`?("^
25. 我在大学里学到了许多知识。 IL\#!|>
I get a lot of knowledge in the university. （fault) vI4St;
I learned a lot in university. t ;(kSg.
26. 黄山正在读书。 wJip{
Samuel is reading a book. （fault) {{j?3O //
Samuel is reading. .hU ndg
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28. 我遇到了很多困难。 -rUn4a
I am having many difficulties. （fault) 7tJPjp4l
I am having a few problems / lots of problems. ^J?I-LG
29. 请快点走，否则我们会迟到的。 !9B)/X i
Please hurry to walk or well be late. （fault) `z F=h#i
Please hurry up or well be late. k \|Hd"T
30. 她由嫉妒转向失望。 q m2
She was so jealous that she became desperate. （fault) dF"Sz4DY#
Jealousy drove her to despair. k/Z}nz
