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2. 这个价格对我挺合适的。 {Xy5pfW
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The price is very suitable for me. （fault) 4_lrg|X1
The price is right. 1I6px$^E\
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3. 你是做什么工作的呢？ >:!5*E5?
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Are you working at the moment? pki%vRY
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4. 用英语怎么说？ \@zHON(
How to say? （fault) gJ{)-\
How do you say this in English? Fo_sgv8O<
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5. 明天我有事情要做。 kTB 0b*V
I have something to do tomorrow? （fault) C )
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Sorry but I am tied up all day tomorrow. 0+ '&`Q!u
用I have something to do来表示您很忙，这也完全是中国式的说法。因为每时每刻我们都有事情要做，躺在那里睡大觉也是事情。所以您可以说我很忙，脱不开身：I抦 tied up.还有其他的说法：I抦 I can't make it at that time. I'd love to, but I can't, I have to stay at home. 5tk AFb4P
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6. 我没有英文名。 Z i
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I haven't English name. （fault) 7]bGc
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I don't have an English name. b|DdG/O
Note：许多人讲英语犯这样的错误，从语法角度来分析，可能是语法功底欠缺，因为have在这里是实义动词，而并不是在现在完成时里面那个没有意义的助动词。所以，这句话由肯定句变成否定句要加助动词。 (t|Zn@uY
明白道理是一回事，习惯是另一回事，请您再说几话：我没有钱；I don't have any money.我没有兄弟姐妹；I don't have any brothers or sisters.我没有车。I don't have a car. w9imKVry
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7. 我想我不行。 n>XdU%&
I think I can't.（fault) ^
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I don't think I can. V!=,0zy~Z
Note：这一组然是个习惯问题，在语法上称为否定前置，这就是汉语里面说?我想我不会?的时候，英语里面总是说?我不认为我会?。以后您在说类似的英语句子的时候，只要您留心，也会习惯英语的说法的。 q;CiV
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8. 我的舞也跳得不好。 ` h\j99
I don't dance well too. （fault) "S]TP$O D
I am not a very good dancer either. Y .UFbrv
Note：当我们说不擅长做什么事情的时候，英语里面通常用not good at something，英语的思维甚至直接踊跃到：我不是一个好的舞者。 'H !Uh]!
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9. 现在几点钟了？ 0OE :[pR
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What time is it, please? X_h}J=33Q
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10. 我的英语很糟糕。 m
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My English is poor. （fault) {\5
I am not 100% fluent, but at least I am improving. =T@1@w
Note：有人开玩笑说，全中国人最擅长的一句英文是：My English is poor.实话说，我从来没有遇到一个美国人对我说：My Chinese is poor. 无论他们的汉语是好是坏，他们会说: I am still having a few problem, but I getting better.
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当您告诉外国人，您的英语很poor，so what(那又怎么样呢)，是要让别人当场施舍给我们一些英语呢，还是说我的英语不好，咱们不谈了吧。 <'*LRd$1
另外一个更大的弊端是，一边不停的学英语，一边不停地说自己的英语很poor,这正像有个人一边给车胎充气，又一边在车胎上扎孔放气。 0~S^Y1hH
我坚信，先不谈别的，如果您现在就苦下功夫，把这本薄薄的《英语54321》吃通吃透，您的英语水平立即就会迅速的提高。所以您再也不用说：我的英语很poor. \b x$i*
您可以实事求是地说，我的英语还不算十分流利，但至少我在进步。 kJ}`V
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11. 你愿意参加我们的晚会吗？ CTa 57R
Would you like to join our party on Friday? （fault) u6agoK|^9
Would you like to come to our party on Friday night? h]gp ^?=
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12. 我没有经验。 da(<K}
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I am I don't know much about that. i.m^/0!
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13. 我没有男朋友。 /4Gt{yg Sr
I have no boyfriend. （fault) jL luj
I don't have a boyfriend. R/YqyT\SM
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14. 他的身体很健康。 %h@EP[\
His body is healthy. （fault) &8lZNv8;(p
He is in good health. You can also say: He抯 healthy. e"<OELA
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15. 价钱很昂贵/便宜。 ,z jv7$L
The price is too expensive/cheap. （fault) ":ue-=&M
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16. 我们下了车。
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We got off the car. 4hj|c CrO
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17. 车速快了。 hgq;`_;1,
The speed of the car is fast. Z ECfR>`x
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18. 这个春节你回家吗？ z0 3K=aZ
Will you be going back home for the Spring Festival? 9'B `]/L
是的，我回去。Of course! （这一句是错的） WyiQoN'q
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以英语为母语的人使用of course的频率要比中国的学生低得多，只有在回答一些众所周知的问题时才说of course。因为of course后面隐含的一句话是?当然我知道啦！难道我是一个傻瓜吗？?因此，of course带有挑衅的意味。在交谈时，用sure或certainly效果会好得多。同时，of course not也具挑衅的意味。正常情况下语气温和的说法是certainly not. 2>%=U~5
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19. 我觉得右手很疼。 /{I$ #:M
I feel very painful in my right hand. 2,b$7xaf
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20. 他看到她很惊讶。 > (<f 0
He looked at her and felt surprised. （fault) $& c*' 3
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21. 我读过你的小说但是没料到你这么年轻。 Pm7}"D'/
I have read your novels but I didn't think you could be so young. （fault) tw@X>
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After having read your novel, I expected that you would be older. @0''k
22. 她脸红了，让我看穿了她的心思。 ~n_HP _Kf?
Her red face made me see through her mind. （fault) He@KV =
Correct: Her red face told me what she was thinking. UN#S;x*
23. 看到这幅画让我想到了我的童年时代。 TWTb?HP
The sight of these pictures made me remember my own childhood. ?@x/E&
Correct: Seeing these pictures reminded me of my own childhood.
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24. 别理她。 i%? * @uj
Don't pay attention to her. （fault)
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25. 我在大学里学到了许多知识。 2 %]X+` +O
I get a lot of knowledge in the university. （fault) AbM'3Mkz
I learned a lot in university. d'> x(Y i
26. 黄山正在读书。 Q J;2ZN,
Samuel is reading a book. （fault) t uX |\X
Samuel is reading. ueNS='+m
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28. 我遇到了很多困难。 u3 D) M%e
I am having many difficulties. （fault) #'}*dy/
I am having a few problems / lots of problems. :`sUt1Fw.
29. 请快点走，否则我们会迟到的。 \;Weizq5
Please hurry to walk or well be late. （fault) &p,]w~d,U
Please hurry up or well be late. MdF2Gk-9
30. 她由嫉妒转向失望。 (9)Q ' 'S
She was so jealous that she became desperate. （fault) Q!3_$<5<E>
Jealousy drove her to despair. uY*L,j^)
