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2. 这个价格对我挺合适的。 jG~-V<&
The price is very suitable for me. （fault) :i4AkBNK
The price is right. 0K' {w]Q
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3. 你是做什么工作的呢？ inY_cn?
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这种说法难道也有毛病吗？是的。因为如果您的谈话对象刚刚失业，如此直接的问法会让对方有失面子，所以您要问：目前您是在上班吗？Are you working at the moment?接下来您才问：目前您在哪儿工作呢？Where are you working these days?或者您从事哪个行业呢？What line of work are you in?顺带说一下，回答这类问题时不妨说得具体一点，不要只是说经理或者秘书 uI$n7 \G!
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4. 用英语怎么说？ n }b{u@$
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5. 明天我有事情要做。 |sI@m @
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Sorry but I am tied up all day tomorrow. w mww7
用I have something to do来表示您很忙，这也完全是中国式的说法。因为每时每刻我们都有事情要做，躺在那里睡大觉也是事情。所以您可以说我很忙，脱不开身：I抦 tied up.还有其他的说法：I抦 I can't make it at that time. I'd love to, but I can't, I have to stay at home. j!@T@
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6. 我没有英文名。 vf zC2
I haven't English name. （fault) j,Mb l"P
I don't have an English name. [[HCP8Wk
Note：许多人讲英语犯这样的错误，从语法角度来分析，可能是语法功底欠缺，因为have在这里是实义动词，而并不是在现在完成时里面那个没有意义的助动词。所以，这句话由肯定句变成否定句要加助动词。 B{b?j*fHJ
明白道理是一回事，习惯是另一回事，请您再说几话：我没有钱；I don't have any money.我没有兄弟姐妹；I don't have any brothers or sisters.我没有车。I don't have a car. O:sqm
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7. 我想我不行。 >fMzUTJ4
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I don't think I can. )w~1VcnJEp
Note：这一组然是个习惯问题，在语法上称为否定前置，这就是汉语里面说?我想我不会?的时候，英语里面总是说?我不认为我会?。以后您在说类似的英语句子的时候，只要您留心，也会习惯英语的说法的。 tA^+RO4
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8. 我的舞也跳得不好。 o{>4PZ}=g
I don't dance well too. （fault) X1d{7H8A2
I am not a very good dancer either. 5kGQf
Note：当我们说不擅长做什么事情的时候，英语里面通常用not good at something，英语的思维甚至直接踊跃到：我不是一个好的舞者。 w[F})u]E
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9. 现在几点钟了？ = /}Rnl+c
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What time is it, please? JNY ?] |=
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10. 我的英语很糟糕。 `v@Z|rv,
My English is poor. （fault) X&HYWH'@,
I am not 100% fluent, but at least I am improving. - . o,bg
Note：有人开玩笑说，全中国人最擅长的一句英文是：My English is poor.实话说，我从来没有遇到一个美国人对我说：My Chinese is poor. 无论他们的汉语是好是坏，他们会说: I am still having a few problem, but I getting better. Rz&`L8B z
当您告诉外国人，您的英语很poor，so what(那又怎么样呢)，是要让别人当场施舍给我们一些英语呢，还是说我的英语不好，咱们不谈了吧。 L@z[b^
另外一个更大的弊端是，一边不停的学英语，一边不停地说自己的英语很poor,这正像有个人一边给车胎充气，又一边在车胎上扎孔放气。 i6P}MtC1
我坚信，先不谈别的，如果您现在就苦下功夫，把这本薄薄的《英语54321》吃通吃透，您的英语水平立即就会迅速的提高。所以您再也不用说：我的英语很poor. 0J^Z )U>j
您可以实事求是地说，我的英语还不算十分流利，但至少我在进步。 2Y%7.YX"
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11. 你愿意参加我们的晚会吗？ W**[:n+
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12. 我没有经验。 g%tUk M
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13. 我没有男朋友。 yZ 7)|j
I have no boyfriend. （fault) Vpp$yM& ?
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14. 他的身体很健康。 >?OUs>}3y2
His body is healthy. （fault) T u%XhXl:j
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15. 价钱很昂贵/便宜。 M*bsA/ Z
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16. 我们下了车。 H> D sAHS
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17. 车速快了。 M"W#_wY;
The speed of the car is fast. BKO^ux%
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18. 这个春节你回家吗？ W!T[
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以英语为母语的人使用of course的频率要比中国的学生低得多，只有在回答一些众所周知的问题时才说of course。因为of course后面隐含的一句话是?当然我知道啦！难道我是一个傻瓜吗？?因此，of course带有挑衅的意味。在交谈时，用sure或certainly效果会好得多。同时，of course not也具挑衅的意味。正常情况下语气温和的说法是certainly not. FX9W X b4w
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19. 我觉得右手很疼。 7X T(n v
I feel very painful in my right hand. IJKdVb~
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20. 他看到她很惊讶。 ;hODzfNkS
He looked at her and felt surprised. （fault) G /$+e
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21. 我读过你的小说但是没料到你这么年轻。 pGD-K41O]
I have read your novels but I didn't think you could be so young. （fault) 0 FE_><e
After having read your novel, I expected that you would be older. 7[ ='m{{=C
22. 她脸红了，让我看穿了她的心思。 }5 n\us
Her red face made me see through her mind. （fault) ^V1\boo=
Correct: Her red face told me what she was thinking. g]JRAM
23. 看到这幅画让我想到了我的童年时代。 GFE3 p
The sight of these pictures made me remember my own childhood. GOGS"q
Correct: Seeing these pictures reminded me of my own childhood. X ^dasU{*
24. 别理她。 0sA`})Dk
Don't pay attention to her. （fault) E+EcXf
Leave her alone. E k_&E7
25. 我在大学里学到了许多知识。 )MSCyPp5
I get a lot of knowledge in the university. （fault) A$7K5
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26. 黄山正在读书。 FeS
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28. 我遇到了很多困难。 o3\^9-jmp
I am having many difficulties. （fault) f3n^Sw&Q(Q
I am having a few problems / lots of problems. y{<js!au
29. 请快点走，否则我们会迟到的。 8@+<W%+th
Please hurry to walk or well be late. （fault) nC
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Please hurry up or well be late. h8%QF'C
30. 她由嫉妒转向失望。 !-n* ]C
She was so jealous that she became desperate. （fault) 3? <A]"X .
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