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I like it very much. (true) LIVVb"V|,
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2. 这个价格对我挺合适的。 @-;-DB]j
The price is very suitable for me. （fault) '&3Sl?E
The price is right. / v;g v[
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3. 你是做什么工作的呢？ @}x)>tqD
What's your job? （fault) S]1+tj
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这种说法难道也有毛病吗？是的。因为如果您的谈话对象刚刚失业，如此直接的问法会让对方有失面子，所以您要问：目前您是在上班吗？Are you working at the moment?接下来您才问：目前您在哪儿工作呢？Where are you working these days?或者您从事哪个行业呢？What line of work are you in?顺带说一下，回答这类问题时不妨说得具体一点，不要只是说经理或者秘书 r[M]2h
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4. 用英语怎么说？ TRAs5I%
How to say? （fault) q?Q"Ab
How do you say this in English? 8R:H{)o~s}
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5. 明天我有事情要做。 +&a2aEXF
I have something to do tomorrow? （fault) ygUvO3Z
Sorry but I am tied up all day tomorrow. 8{JTR|yB
用I have something to do来表示您很忙，这也完全是中国式的说法。因为每时每刻我们都有事情要做，躺在那里睡大觉也是事情。所以您可以说我很忙，脱不开身：I抦 tied up.还有其他的说法：I抦 I can't make it at that time. I'd love to, but I can't, I have to stay at home. :
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6. 我没有英文名。 oRy?Dx+H
I haven't English name. （fault) & HphE2 h
I don't have an English name. dlK#V)
Note：许多人讲英语犯这样的错误，从语法角度来分析，可能是语法功底欠缺，因为have在这里是实义动词，而并不是在现在完成时里面那个没有意义的助动词。所以，这句话由肯定句变成否定句要加助动词。 % o#D"
明白道理是一回事，习惯是另一回事，请您再说几话：我没有钱；I don't have any money.我没有兄弟姐妹；I don't have any brothers or sisters.我没有车。I don't have a car. X\
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7. 我想我不行。 & N*S
I think I can't.（fault) 0wZLkU_(
I don't think I can. D Z ~|yH
Note：这一组然是个习惯问题，在语法上称为否定前置，这就是汉语里面说?我想我不会?的时候，英语里面总是说?我不认为我会?。以后您在说类似的英语句子的时候，只要您留心，也会习惯英语的说法的。 Fm,A<+l@u
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8. 我的舞也跳得不好。 .rG Rdb
I don't dance well too. （fault) ERGDo=j
I am not a very good dancer either. v[r:1T@
Note：当我们说不擅长做什么事情的时候，英语里面通常用not good at something，英语的思维甚至直接踊跃到：我不是一个好的舞者。
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9. 现在几点钟了？ tJ.LPgfZ
What time is it now? （fault) / vje='[!
What time is it, please?
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10. 我的英语很糟糕。 k'%c| kx8U
My English is poor. （fault) p`Omcl ~Q
I am not 100% fluent, but at least I am improving. +2B{"Czm
Note：有人开玩笑说，全中国人最擅长的一句英文是：My English is poor.实话说，我从来没有遇到一个美国人对我说：My Chinese is poor. 无论他们的汉语是好是坏，他们会说: I am still having a few problem, but I getting better. k%:]PQjYT
当您告诉外国人，您的英语很poor，so what(那又怎么样呢)，是要让别人当场施舍给我们一些英语呢，还是说我的英语不好，咱们不谈了吧。 #&r^~>,#L-
另外一个更大的弊端是，一边不停的学英语，一边不停地说自己的英语很poor,这正像有个人一边给车胎充气，又一边在车胎上扎孔放气。 AWQwpaj-
我坚信，先不谈别的，如果您现在就苦下功夫，把这本薄薄的《英语54321》吃通吃透，您的英语水平立即就会迅速的提高。所以您再也不用说：我的英语很poor. dm.?-u;C
您可以实事求是地说，我的英语还不算十分流利，但至少我在进步。 Ej 'a
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11. 你愿意参加我们的晚会吗？ {
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Would you like to join our party on Friday? （fault) j^iH[pN] \
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12. 我没有经验。 SP
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I am I don't know much about that. vCbqZdy?
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I have no boyfriend. （fault) ;5" r)F+P
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14. 他的身体很健康。 bMkn(_H)\
His body is healthy. （fault) <LZvG IMl
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15. 价钱很昂贵/便宜。 ,O 3"r;
The price is too expensive/cheap. （fault) N1P [&lR
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16. 我们下了车。 wzo-V^+q
We got off the car. fR aVY`|wK
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17. 车速快了。 kfm8F8sxl
The speed of the car is fast. L-@j9hU{
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18. 这个春节你回家吗？ 5>}L3r>a;
Will you be going back home for the Spring Festival? 4y
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当然。Sure. / Certainly.（这种说法是正确的） \e'>$8%T
以英语为母语的人使用of course的频率要比中国的学生低得多，只有在回答一些众所周知的问题时才说of course。因为of course后面隐含的一句话是?当然我知道啦！难道我是一个傻瓜吗？?因此，of course带有挑衅的意味。在交谈时，用sure或certainly效果会好得多。同时，of course not也具挑衅的意味。正常情况下语气温和的说法是certainly not. RG: ct{i
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19. 我觉得右手很疼。 uZmfvMr3
I feel very painful in my right hand. Om >6<3n
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20. 他看到她很惊讶。 ^>g+:?x
He looked at her and felt surprised. （fault) SGNi~o
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21. 我读过你的小说但是没料到你这么年轻。 q uGb;)3
I have read your novels but I didn't think you could be so young. （fault) fB
After having read your novel, I expected that you would be older. v8 6ls[lzu
22. 她脸红了，让我看穿了她的心思。 Sm+Ek@Ax
Her red face made me see through her mind. （fault) /MQd [03]
Correct: Her red face told me what she was thinking. ]C )PZZI='
23. 看到这幅画让我想到了我的童年时代。 ]>R`]U9*O
The sight of these pictures made me remember my own childhood. PcUi+[s;x
Correct: Seeing these pictures reminded me of my own childhood. ]7dm`XV
24. 别理她。 >L& >B5)9
Don't pay attention to her. （fault) L8 R|\Bx
Leave her alone. zq{L:.#ha
25. 我在大学里学到了许多知识。 3@ay9 !Xq
I get a lot of knowledge in the university. （fault) =x/]2+
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I learned a lot in university. VWLou
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26. 黄山正在读书。 fKr Oz! b
Samuel is reading a book. （fault) qMI %=@=
Samuel is reading. tV# x{DN
27. exciting / excited。 ;zSh 9H
28. 我遇到了很多困难。 InPq 1AH
I am having many difficulties. （fault) 4!/{CGP
I am having a few problems / lots of problems. HpNf f0c
29. 请快点走，否则我们会迟到的。 P_&2HA,I
Please hurry to walk or well be late. （fault) ?"qU.}kGL
Please hurry up or well be late.
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30. 她由嫉妒转向失望。 5Z`f)qE
She was so jealous that she became desperate. （fault) 5G\vV]RR&
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