1. I very like it （Fault） GMY"*J<E
I like it very much. (true) #0i] g)
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2. 这个价格对我挺合适的。 _N.N?>
The price is very suitable for me. （fault) "IK QFt'
The price is right. U[!x
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3. 你是做什么工作的呢？ t-xw= &!w
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这种说法难道也有毛病吗？是的。因为如果您的谈话对象刚刚失业，如此直接的问法会让对方有失面子，所以您要问：目前您是在上班吗？Are you working at the moment?接下来您才问：目前您在哪儿工作呢？Where are you working these days?或者您从事哪个行业呢？What line of work are you in?顺带说一下，回答这类问题时不妨说得具体一点，不要只是说经理或者秘书 8x`? Yc
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4. 用英语怎么说？ 6[-N})
How to say? （fault) p4 \r`
How do you say this in English? L*A9a
Note：How to say是在中国最为泛滥成灾的中国式英语之一，这决不是地道的英语说法。同样的句子有：请问这个词如何拼写？How do you spell that please?请问这个单词怎么读？How do you pronounce this word? \]uo^@$bm
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5. 明天我有事情要做。 07zbx6:t
I have something to do tomorrow? （fault) %fS__Tb#u
Sorry but I am tied up all day tomorrow. XO*|P\#^
用I have something to do来表示您很忙，这也完全是中国式的说法。因为每时每刻我们都有事情要做，躺在那里睡大觉也是事情。所以您可以说我很忙，脱不开身：I抦 tied up.还有其他的说法：I抦 I can't make it at that time. I'd love to, but I can't, I have to stay at home. 7=YjY)6r^
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6. 我没有英文名。 +Om(&\c(6
I haven't English name. （fault) T.1*32cX
I don't have an English name. QE l:>HG
Note：许多人讲英语犯这样的错误，从语法角度来分析，可能是语法功底欠缺，因为have在这里是实义动词，而并不是在现在完成时里面那个没有意义的助动词。所以，这句话由肯定句变成否定句要加助动词。 x Z 3b)j2D
明白道理是一回事，习惯是另一回事，请您再说几话：我没有钱；I don't have any money.我没有兄弟姐妹；I don't have any brothers or sisters.我没有车。I don't have a car. *vx!twu1o
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7. 我想我不行。 g~5$X{
I think I can't.（fault) -}l iG
I don't think I can. 83"Vh$&
Note：这一组然是个习惯问题，在语法上称为否定前置，这就是汉语里面说?我想我不会?的时候，英语里面总是说?我不认为我会?。以后您在说类似的英语句子的时候，只要您留心，也会习惯英语的说法的。 =.@{ uu;
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8. 我的舞也跳得不好。 +w~ <2Kt8
I don't dance well too. （fault) ]!yuD/4A
I am not a very good dancer either. CJ *8x7-t
Note：当我们说不擅长做什么事情的时候，英语里面通常用not good at something，英语的思维甚至直接踊跃到：我不是一个好的舞者。 `0@onDQVc=
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9. 现在几点钟了？ gr \UI!]F
What time is it now? （fault) 3 "ALohlL
What time is it, please? jhd&\z-
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10. 我的英语很糟糕。 o6 JCy\Bx
My English is poor. （fault) ; ^waUJ\Z
I am not 100% fluent, but at least I am improving. 0n5{Wr$
Note：有人开玩笑说，全中国人最擅长的一句英文是：My English is poor.实话说，我从来没有遇到一个美国人对我说：My Chinese is poor. 无论他们的汉语是好是坏，他们会说: I am still having a few problem, but I getting better. oyQp"'|N
当您告诉外国人，您的英语很poor，so what(那又怎么样呢)，是要让别人当场施舍给我们一些英语呢，还是说我的英语不好，咱们不谈了吧。 d5/x2!mH 8
另外一个更大的弊端是，一边不停的学英语，一边不停地说自己的英语很poor,这正像有个人一边给车胎充气，又一边在车胎上扎孔放气。 ),9^hJ1+@
我坚信，先不谈别的，如果您现在就苦下功夫，把这本薄薄的《英语54321》吃通吃透，您的英语水平立即就会迅速的提高。所以您再也不用说：我的英语很poor. 4Wz@^7|V5
您可以实事求是地说，我的英语还不算十分流利，但至少我在进步。 {+CW_ce
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11. 你愿意参加我们的晚会吗？ lTl-< E;
Would you like to join our party on Friday? （fault) "~
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Would you like to come to our party on Friday night? JI TQ3UL:W
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12. 我没有经验。 aRPpDSR?l
I have no experience. （fault) LxWnPi ^
I am I don't know much about that. .M3]\I u
Note：I have no experience这句话听起来古里古怪，因为您只需要说：那方面我懂得不多，或者这方面我不在行，就行了。I am not really an expert in this area. ]njObU)[zr
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13. 我没有男朋友。 blbL49;
I have no boyfriend. （fault) :A +nmz!z
I don't have a boyfriend. TqzL] 'NS+
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14. 他的身体很健康。 .Ux bwTup
His body is healthy. （fault) O=2"t%Gc
He is in good health. You can also say: He抯 healthy. @FC|1=+
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15. 价钱很昂贵/便宜。 CC?L~/gPN
The price is too expensive/cheap. （fault) rCOH*m&
The price is too high/ rather low. 1y\ -Iz^
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16. 我们下了车。 ,;RAPT4
We got off the car. dvPK 5+0W?
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17. 车速快了。 =6PTT$,
The speed of the car is fast. [SnnOq Ww
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18. 这个春节你回家吗？ d A[MjOd3
Will you be going back home for the Spring Festival? <=1 nr@L
是的，我回去。Of course! （这一句是错的） ;nzzt~aCC
当然。Sure. / Certainly.（这种说法是正确的） w.AF7.X`1
以英语为母语的人使用of course的频率要比中国的学生低得多，只有在回答一些众所周知的问题时才说of course。因为of course后面隐含的一句话是?当然我知道啦！难道我是一个傻瓜吗？?因此，of course带有挑衅的意味。在交谈时，用sure或certainly效果会好得多。同时，of course not也具挑衅的意味。正常情况下语气温和的说法是certainly not. xN^ngRg0
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19. 我觉得右手很疼。 itH`
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I feel very painful in my right hand. G@Jl4iHug"
My right hand is very painful. Or ? My right hand hurts(aches).? 8eAc 5by
20. 他看到她很惊讶。 V _1'` F
He looked at her and felt surprised. （fault) 0uw3[,I
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21. 我读过你的小说但是没料到你这么年轻。 P~6Q Rm
I have read your novels but I didn't think you could be so young. （fault) G7|CwzMg
After having read your novel, I expected that you would be older. 7v{X?86&
22. 她脸红了，让我看穿了她的心思。 L%h Vts'
Her red face made me see through her mind. （fault) ~8rVf+bg3
Correct: Her red face told me what she was thinking. 0$saDmED
23. 看到这幅画让我想到了我的童年时代。 D%WgE&wtM
The sight of these pictures made me remember my own childhood. :)~idV lV
Correct: Seeing these pictures reminded me of my own childhood. Cp`>dtCd
24. 别理她。 {[
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Don't pay attention to her. （fault) gwm}19JC
Leave her alone. Kuj*U'ed7t
25. 我在大学里学到了许多知识。 |I0O|Zdv
I get a lot of knowledge in the university. （fault) E0SP
I learned a lot in university. J|'e.1v
26. 黄山正在读书。 dn? #}^,"
Samuel is reading a book. （fault) t;^NgkP{$
Samuel is reading. 2r 0u[
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28. 我遇到了很多困难。 &efwfnG<
I am having many difficulties. （fault) |aaoi4OJ
I am having a few problems / lots of problems. }mhD2 ' E
29. 请快点走，否则我们会迟到的。 S4'\=w #
Please hurry to walk or well be late. （fault) "Z\^d R
Please hurry up or well be late. =7*k>]o
30. 她由嫉妒转向失望。 ~ 9tPT 0^+
She was so jealous that she became desperate. （fault) A,WZ}v}_
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