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3. 你是做什么工作的呢？ ~gSF@tz@
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Are you working at the moment? /zChdjz
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这种说法难道也有毛病吗？是的。因为如果您的谈话对象刚刚失业，如此直接的问法会让对方有失面子，所以您要问：目前您是在上班吗？Are you working at the moment?接下来您才问：目前您在哪儿工作呢？Where are you working these days?或者您从事哪个行业呢？What line of work are you in?顺带说一下，回答这类问题时不妨说得具体一点，不要只是说经理或者秘书 CO xZ
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4. 用英语怎么说？ +!mNm?H[!
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5. 明天我有事情要做。 bCJ<=X,g`K
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用I have something to do来表示您很忙，这也完全是中国式的说法。因为每时每刻我们都有事情要做，躺在那里睡大觉也是事情。所以您可以说我很忙，脱不开身：I抦 tied up.还有其他的说法：I抦 I can't make it at that time. I'd love to, but I can't, I have to stay at home. 5n&)q=jk=
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6. 我没有英文名。 B}l}Aq8
I haven't English name. （fault) I;bg?RsF
I don't have an English name. w>/pQ6=OFR
Note：许多人讲英语犯这样的错误，从语法角度来分析，可能是语法功底欠缺，因为have在这里是实义动词，而并不是在现在完成时里面那个没有意义的助动词。所以，这句话由肯定句变成否定句要加助动词。 Ww a41z
明白道理是一回事，习惯是另一回事，请您再说几话：我没有钱；I don't have any money.我没有兄弟姐妹；I don't have any brothers or sisters.我没有车。I don't have a car. t?3{s\z 8+
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I don't think I can. - eSPoZ
Note：这一组然是个习惯问题，在语法上称为否定前置，这就是汉语里面说?我想我不会?的时候，英语里面总是说?我不认为我会?。以后您在说类似的英语句子的时候，只要您留心，也会习惯英语的说法的。 mGM inzf
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8. 我的舞也跳得不好。 5~<a>>
I don't dance well too. （fault) IPr*pQ{;c
I am not a very good dancer either. ( ;Dn%kK
Note：当我们说不擅长做什么事情的时候，英语里面通常用not good at something，英语的思维甚至直接踊跃到：我不是一个好的舞者。 Z
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9. 现在几点钟了？ p``;!3~ ~
What time is it now? （fault) Sop Ntcu!
What time is it, please? :$X4#k<
Note：What time is it now这是一个直接从汉语翻译过的句子，讲英语的时候没有必要说now,因为您不可能问what time was it yesterday, 或者what time is it tomorrow?所以符合英语习惯的说法是：请问现在几点了？还有一种说法是：How are we doing for time?这句话在有时间限制的时候特别合适 A{{q'zb!
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10. 我的英语很糟糕。 v4Fnh`{
My English is poor. （fault) 79< 9}<T
I am not 100% fluent, but at least I am improving. $_ I%1
Note：有人开玩笑说，全中国人最擅长的一句英文是：My English is poor.实话说，我从来没有遇到一个美国人对我说：My Chinese is poor. 无论他们的汉语是好是坏，他们会说: I am still having a few problem, but I getting better. Os]!B2j14
当您告诉外国人，您的英语很poor，so what(那又怎么样呢)，是要让别人当场施舍给我们一些英语呢，还是说我的英语不好，咱们不谈了吧。
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另外一个更大的弊端是，一边不停的学英语，一边不停地说自己的英语很poor,这正像有个人一边给车胎充气，又一边在车胎上扎孔放气。 w<I5@)i|
我坚信，先不谈别的，如果您现在就苦下功夫，把这本薄薄的《英语54321》吃通吃透，您的英语水平立即就会迅速的提高。所以您再也不用说：我的英语很poor. *`QdkVER
您可以实事求是地说，我的英语还不算十分流利，但至少我在进步。 ~L4*b *W
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11. 你愿意参加我们的晚会吗？ zBr Wm_R5T
Would you like to join our party on Friday? （fault) %~8](]p
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12. 我没有经验。 toYg$IV
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13. 我没有男朋友。 FS]+s>
I have no boyfriend. （fault) MK!]y8+Z
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14. 他的身体很健康。 ?Uy*6YS
His body is healthy. （fault) YWn6wzu%Vc
He is in good health. You can also say: He抯 healthy. /!&b '7y
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The price is too expensive/cheap. （fault) X-;Qorb^
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16. 我们下了车。 X{9JSq
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18. 这个春节你回家吗？ 71n uTE%!
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以英语为母语的人使用of course的频率要比中国的学生低得多，只有在回答一些众所周知的问题时才说of course。因为of course后面隐含的一句话是?当然我知道啦！难道我是一个傻瓜吗？?因此，of course带有挑衅的意味。在交谈时，用sure或certainly效果会好得多。同时，of course not也具挑衅的意味。正常情况下语气温和的说法是certainly not. #G4~]Qml
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19. 我觉得右手很疼。 \aJ-q?=
I feel very painful in my right hand. bTy' 5 "
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20. 他看到她很惊讶。 T0]%(F/8
He looked at her and felt surprised. （fault) D=I5[t 0c4
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21. 我读过你的小说但是没料到你这么年轻。 ;o)`9<es!2
I have read your novels but I didn't think you could be so young. （fault) A86lyBDQ*
After having read your novel, I expected that you would be older. z7us*8X{
22. 她脸红了，让我看穿了她的心思。 nm:let7GB
Her red face made me see through her mind. （fault) V~uA(3\U
Correct: Her red face told me what she was thinking. ^?S@v1~7d
23. 看到这幅画让我想到了我的童年时代。 >I 66R;
The sight of these pictures made me remember my own childhood. pg& ]F
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24. 别理她。 *l'$pJ X
Don't pay attention to her. （fault) /cg]wG!n8
Leave her alone. )z c8bS
25. 我在大学里学到了许多知识。 GYb2m"a)
I get a lot of knowledge in the university. （fault) ph&H *Mc
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26. 黄山正在读书。 (a)@<RF`Q}
Samuel is reading a book. （fault) M]/wei"X
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28. 我遇到了很多困难。 &t%&l0
I am having many difficulties. （fault) J-%PyvK$?
I am having a few problems / lots of problems. VOF: +o@.
29. 请快点走，否则我们会迟到的。 Y Q8x6AJ
Please hurry to walk or well be late. （fault) ~C*6V{Tj
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30. 她由嫉妒转向失望。 'N5r2JL[w
She was so jealous that she became desperate. （fault) Kg0\Pvg8?T
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