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I like it very much. (true) My >{;n=}
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2. 这个价格对我挺合适的。 v?1xYG@1
The price is very suitable for me. （fault) EE p,Z`
The price is right. _q\w9gN
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3. 你是做什么工作的呢？ ~|)'vK8W
What's your job? （fault) [318Q%W&
Are you working at the moment? ^R S`q+g
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这种说法难道也有毛病吗？是的。因为如果您的谈话对象刚刚失业，如此直接的问法会让对方有失面子，所以您要问：目前您是在上班吗？Are you working at the moment?接下来您才问：目前您在哪儿工作呢？Where are you working these days?或者您从事哪个行业呢？What line of work are you in?顺带说一下，回答这类问题时不妨说得具体一点，不要只是说经理或者秘书 G&*2h2,]
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4. 用英语怎么说？ j1,ir
How to say? （fault) n.xW"omN
How do you say this in English? }" 'l8t0?
Note：How to say是在中国最为泛滥成灾的中国式英语之一，这决不是地道的英语说法。同样的句子有：请问这个词如何拼写？How do you spell that please?请问这个单词怎么读？How do you pronounce this word? 0l ]K%5#
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5. 明天我有事情要做。 pEE. %U
I have something to do tomorrow? （fault) Ol] +l]
Sorry but I am tied up all day tomorrow. 7l3sd5
用I have something to do来表示您很忙，这也完全是中国式的说法。因为每时每刻我们都有事情要做，躺在那里睡大觉也是事情。所以您可以说我很忙，脱不开身：I抦 tied up.还有其他的说法：I抦 I can't make it at that time. I'd love to, but I can't, I have to stay at home. 13P8Zmco
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6. 我没有英文名。 m;nT ?kv
I haven't English name. （fault) `H6kC$^Ofx
I don't have an English name. Lm }:`
Note：许多人讲英语犯这样的错误，从语法角度来分析，可能是语法功底欠缺，因为have在这里是实义动词，而并不是在现在完成时里面那个没有意义的助动词。所以，这句话由肯定句变成否定句要加助动词。 Fn!kest
明白道理是一回事，习惯是另一回事，请您再说几话：我没有钱；I don't have any money.我没有兄弟姐妹；I don't have any brothers or sisters.我没有车。I don't have a car. ebS>_jD
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7. 我想我不行。 l ;SqjkN
I think I can't.（fault) anTS8b
I don't think I can. C2< /.jeLa
Note：这一组然是个习惯问题，在语法上称为否定前置，这就是汉语里面说?我想我不会?的时候，英语里面总是说?我不认为我会?。以后您在说类似的英语句子的时候，只要您留心，也会习惯英语的说法的。 Wf= D'6w
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8. 我的舞也跳得不好。 Ytnk^/Z1L
I don't dance well too. （fault) AA
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I am not a very good dancer either. Rx 4
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Note：当我们说不擅长做什么事情的时候，英语里面通常用not good at something，英语的思维甚至直接踊跃到：我不是一个好的舞者。 *1KrI9i
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9. 现在几点钟了？ bgjo_!J+Pp
What time is it now? （fault) /r Hd9^Y
What time is it, please? Hb;#aXHSd
Note：What time is it now这是一个直接从汉语翻译过的句子，讲英语的时候没有必要说now,因为您不可能问what time was it yesterday, 或者what time is it tomorrow?所以符合英语习惯的说法是：请问现在几点了？还有一种说法是：How are we doing for time?这句话在有时间限制的时候特别合适 *.J)7~(P
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10. 我的英语很糟糕。 ]QS? fs Z
My English is poor. （fault) tQ:)j^\
I am not 100% fluent, but at least I am improving. Ln})\
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Note：有人开玩笑说，全中国人最擅长的一句英文是：My English is poor.实话说，我从来没有遇到一个美国人对我说：My Chinese is poor. 无论他们的汉语是好是坏，他们会说: I am still having a few problem, but I getting better. xCM cS~
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当您告诉外国人，您的英语很poor，so what(那又怎么样呢)，是要让别人当场施舍给我们一些英语呢，还是说我的英语不好，咱们不谈了吧。 @4D$Xl
另外一个更大的弊端是，一边不停的学英语，一边不停地说自己的英语很poor,这正像有个人一边给车胎充气，又一边在车胎上扎孔放气。 t .&YD x
我坚信，先不谈别的，如果您现在就苦下功夫，把这本薄薄的《英语54321》吃通吃透，您的英语水平立即就会迅速的提高。所以您再也不用说：我的英语很poor. RS~jHwIh
您可以实事求是地说，我的英语还不算十分流利，但至少我在进步。 ^U.8grA
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11. 你愿意参加我们的晚会吗？ bCF"4KXK
Would you like to join our party on Friday? （fault) [g:ZIl4p\P
Would you like to come to our party on Friday night? q]Cmaf (
Note：join往往是指参加俱乐部或者协会，如：join a health club; join the Communist Party.事实上，常常与party搭配的动词的come 或者go。如go a wild party，或者come to a Christmas Party。 @< tkwu
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12. 我没有经验。 h$FpH\-
I have no experience. （fault) IR,`-
I am I don't know much about that. ?j{LE- (
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13. 我没有男朋友。 LuB-9[^<
I have no boyfriend. （fault) / ,z4tf
I don't have a boyfriend. R*D0 A@
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14. 他的身体很健康。 geL)v7t+#
His body is healthy. （fault) d([NU;
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15. 价钱很昂贵/便宜。 3PLv;@!#j}
The price is too expensive/cheap. （fault) |>(;gr/5(
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16. 我们下了车。 `Pv[A
We got off the car. xZ } 1dq8
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17. 车速快了。 Lf|5miO
The speed of the car is fast. #`rvL6W q}
The car is speeding. Or 揟he car is going too fast.? '-ti H
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Will you be going back home for the Spring Festival? %Uj7 g>
是的，我回去。Of course! （这一句是错的） ;#G)([
当然。Sure. / Certainly.（这种说法是正确的） 8*;88vW"2
以英语为母语的人使用of course的频率要比中国的学生低得多，只有在回答一些众所周知的问题时才说of course。因为of course后面隐含的一句话是?当然我知道啦！难道我是一个傻瓜吗？?因此，of course带有挑衅的意味。在交谈时，用sure或certainly效果会好得多。同时，of course not也具挑衅的意味。正常情况下语气温和的说法是certainly not. }U K<t UO
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19. 我觉得右手很疼。 gwtR<2 ,p
I feel very painful in my right hand. Nh7 +Vl
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20. 他看到她很惊讶。 *P,dR]-m
He looked at her and felt surprised. （fault) #;?j]npg]
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21. 我读过你的小说但是没料到你这么年轻。 &)@|WLW
I have read your novels but I didn't think you could be so young. （fault) JyY-@GF
After having read your novel, I expected that you would be older. 48JD >=@7
22. 她脸红了，让我看穿了她的心思。 a%a_sR\)
Her red face made me see through her mind. （fault) _ ,Wb`P
Correct: Her red face told me what she was thinking. n$n)!XL/
23. 看到这幅画让我想到了我的童年时代。 3A'vq2beM
The sight of these pictures made me remember my own childhood. FMCX->}$
Correct: Seeing these pictures reminded me of my own childhood. G j[`r
24. 别理她。 G:NI+E"]
Don't pay attention to her. （fault) bLyU;
Leave her alone. e)kN%JqW
25. 我在大学里学到了许多知识。 i#o:V/Z .
I get a lot of knowledge in the university. （fault) zrWkz3FN
I learned a lot in university. T >X nVK
26. 黄山正在读书。 Zi5d"V[}T
Samuel is reading a book. （fault) dGU io?
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27. exciting / excited。 M}|<#
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28. 我遇到了很多困难。 ;Ll/rJ:*
I am having many difficulties. （fault) QZ!;` ?(
I am having a few problems / lots of problems. \^O#)&5 V
29. 请快点走，否则我们会迟到的。 WVUa:_5{
Please hurry to walk or well be late. （fault) c+:LDc3!Gb
Please hurry up or well be late.
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30. 她由嫉妒转向失望。 B -XM(C j
She was so jealous that she became desperate. （fault) +.gM "JV
Jealousy drove her to despair. RN(>37B3_
